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Reviews for Drunken Mistakes

By : MrsRupertGrint1769
  • From arashi1412 on April 06, 2009
    Harry belly button ring?? i thought Harry is a nipple ring type of guy...?
    i LOVE the Ron is being a git scene!!
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  • From PrettyMassacre on April 06, 2009
    I have the old story saved and the first chapter of the sequel so I cant wait to reread the story and for you to put out the sequel :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 05, 2009
    Oh that was tooo cute! Even though Harry and Ron are no longer friends! Wow! I soooo need chapter 7!
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  • From greenwizard11 on April 05, 2009
    I do remember this story, and I'm pretty sure I really liked it. What's the sequel, and do you have an update mailing list?
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  • From christis on April 04, 2009
    ok, so I had started to read this story a couple of times before and for some reason never followed through...so glad I finally have gotten caught up, because I really really like it so far and can't wait to read more :-)
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  • From Juana13 on April 04, 2009
    Oh i really do hope you update soon!!!! i love this fic!
    absolutely love this version of draco hee hee.
    i wonder whats gonna happen when harry finds out draco is his secret admirer. : )
    hope to see an update of the next chapter soon. cant wait!!! so looking forward to it!!!!!!! : )
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  • From ANON - Kelly Hilliard on April 04, 2009
    I really like this story. Its not rushed and is very believable. I hope to be able to follow it if you have a list you can send out. I wish AFF had some kind of subscription option like FFN. Thanks for taking the time and effort to write this story for us to read and share. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 04, 2009
    it is a nice story, I hope you update soon!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 26, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2009
    So glad you updated!!! Can't wait till the next chapter!!!! I hope it's soon!
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  • From ANON - A Friend on February 11, 2009
    Heather,

    You've done a good job so far. Of course, you know how I am, there are a ton of recommendations I could make. All of those aside though, you do know what you're doing. You can let me know if you want to hear me go chapter by chapter. For now, I just want to say two things: First, I would like it very much if you picked up Techniques of the Selling Writer by Dwight V. Swain, either from the bookstore or the library. You can use the library's website to have it sent for, I've done it tons of times. If you really enjoy reading about writing, then pick up Stephen King's On Writing also. These will give you tools to really polish your work. Talent is great, and you've got it, but when talent is refined and honed through practice and study, it becomes truly powerful. My second idea is that you give Draco nipple rings instead of a belly button ring. Just because Draco is gay and secretly has a soft spot for Harry doesn't mean you have to sacrifice any of his masculinity. After all, the beauty of the male is in masculinity, is it not? Just as the beauty of a woman is in her femininity. Plenty of guys like butterflies without getting tattoos/piercings that show them off. The nipple rings give you the little kink of piercings, plus it will give them something to play with. The belly button is hardly as erotic as the nipples. Just a suggestion.

    Don't freak at this note. I'm still your same friend.

    Jay

    P.S. - It does need some copyediting. There are just a few grammar/spelling issues that need to be cleaned up. Sometimes we spend so much time thinking about the content that we miss the small stuff. Honestly, I only get them all on a revision if someone else has read my work. Even then, mistakes can be missed. Talk to you later. :)
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on February 09, 2009
    Love it so far, so wheres the rest?
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  • From arashi1412 on February 07, 2009
    DRACO GOT A BUTTERFLY BELLY BUTTON ??? BUT THAT'S... SO... SOO...... CUTE!!!
    but that is soo.... bottom... is he gonna be bottoming soon??!!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 06, 2009
    I loved the way you wrote Draco's confession! very very nice and Harry is oblivious but cute. Can't wait for more. Thank you!
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  • From Ecks on February 06, 2009
    Great Chapter!
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