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  • From chiquitaf16 on December 13, 2009
    oohh, I love a dark Draco
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  • From chiquitaf16 on December 13, 2009
    So far i feel this should be disturbing that Voldemort will have such a victory as to kill off a large portion of the weasleys but I'm not. I guess I like the Draco Hermione pairing so much that so long as He's not crueling raping and beating her, that it doesn't really matter what happens to the other characters. So far this story is fairly unique in that Hermione is a pureblood whom Draco wants but he is not changing his allegiance just to win her.
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  • From jaimelee on October 18, 2009
    Love this story! Please update!!!!
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  • From BabyMomma2fo on September 20, 2009
    i like it so far hope you will update soon
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  • From IntegraHellsing on August 16, 2009
    poor Mione.....Draco seems determined to get his way! I am curious as to how she will react when Draco informs her of her situation.
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  • From jaceni50 on August 14, 2009
    Lala you are fast becoming my favorite writer. :) I like your stories when it's dramione most of the time and love this one as well as your other fic named The Malfoy Secret. This story is interesting and hopefully you continue it soon. :)
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  • From jacqui on August 05, 2009
    I like this story, please continue it. Sorry it got deleted the 1st time but I'm glad I found it this time around. I hope this Hermione isn't going to succumb to Draco's charms too easily. I like it when she fights back in creative and unusual ways. But it is your story so lead on! I was surprised to see a suicide attempt so early in the story. Since she knows that Ron is alive I would assume that she is hoping for a rescue at some point. Or did I read that wrong?

    Anyway, keep up the good work I look forward to your updates!
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  • From margaritama on August 05, 2009
    Love this dark fic
    can't wait to see what he does to win her over
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  • From jaimelee on July 24, 2009
    Great start... can we get more?
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  • From jcschaefer on July 22, 2009
    wow i read this before when you had it up and when i saw it again i did a happy dance! this is a great story with a great plot. can not wait for more.
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  • From fuzzydraco on July 22, 2009
    Ooo. I like it. you definitely need to post more!
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  • From margaritama on July 22, 2009
    Explosive second chapter. What will Draco do to make her love him? I hope they have a happy ending (though it might dark for everyone else...oh well).

    PS: I still recommend a beta. And maybe limit the "sss" on Voldemort's verbiage, its a bit tough to get through -- all you needed to do it allude to how he sounds like a hissing snake, each "sss" is elongated in an extended hiss. Or something like that.

    Looking for chapter 3.
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  • From margaritama on July 22, 2009
    Very nice start. But I do recommend that you use a beta to help with the tiny spelling and grammar errors. looking forward to more. Dark Draco is smexy.
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  • From kazfeist on July 22, 2009
    Certainly an action-filled second chapter. I forget why you chose the Rosier family to have Hermione as a descendant? Did you mention it in the first chapter? Anyway, interesting choice and I look forward to seeing what happens next. :D
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  • From kazfeist on April 16, 2009
    Don't know if I reviewed before, but I do remember reading this story, at least this first chapter. Hopefully, you'll upload the other chapters soon. :D
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