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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From ANON - Nicoolio27 on July 10, 2010
    Hi,
    you don't know me but recently I've fallen in love with this fic. HAHA.

    No but really, the work you've done on this fic is wonderful. Every time I expect it to end, you add another twist and turn to it. The end product has made me squee. And this is is a big deal since I close to never squee for joy.
    This story has the best aspects in it, and the writing is impeccable. :D

    I applaud you joyously, you have brought all my favorite themes into one story (lycanthropy, Hermione x Luscious.... I mean Lucius ;) , adoption, and the handsome Sirius Black returning). Your story runs seamlessly, like random interwoven strings all put together to make a daring but beautiful piece of cloth.

    I also love the originality of your story. Where else would I be able to find Lucius, Hermione, a werewolf, and a Cherokee witch? :) though, byfar my favorite character of yours is Daisy, she is perfect the way you portrayed her, when I was 13 I remember feeling all she was feeling and the awkwardness of it all and the pain of seperation between her and Phelan seems all too acurate and real. It's pretty amazing.

    Have you ever thought of going into the writing industry? I'd be excited to read this kind of book, but maybe you could write it in purley daisy's POV. I think it'd be an intense pageturner. :)

    I am so excited for the next chapter. :O everyone's like "I can't believe it's REMUS! I though you were dead, man, but it's ok. We're all chill now... Oh didya hear? Sirius is alive too!"

    one little question though. How do you pronounce Phelan's name? Like "felon" or "fee-lan"?(HA! I'm concidering naming my new Pit puppy Felan after your Phelan. )

    :) good work! UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on July 09, 2010
    Why I do believe you're right...the shit is about to hit the fan!!!!

    Nice to see Draco not being such an ass.
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  • From ANON - April on July 09, 2010
    I'm sooo happy that Remus is going to be ok, well at least for now. Oh and to be reunited with Sirius. Oh I'm so giddy right now.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 09, 2010
    Okay, the way that Remus convinced Arthur that he was really himself was just... um... like squicky. Mad-Eye and Albus....um....ewwww * gag * But I like that little rhyme between Shacklebolt and Remus. Where are you gonna take us next?
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  • From ANON - Josie on July 09, 2010
    I LOVE this story and it just keeps on getting better...you've brought back Voldie to kill him off again, you've brought back Remus (who didnt deserve to die in the first place)...eagerly anticipating what will happen next! xx
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  • From eileenmurphy on July 09, 2010
    Thank you for writing this story. I have enjoyed every page and watch for updates.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 09, 2010
    Hello, Luv. First, I have to comment on your ending "Oh SNAP! Shit's about to get nasty in this joint! Somebody's about to cap a ninja! *Shady eyes*" LMAO ROTFLMAO LOL Thank you for that giggle. And, congrats on the new 'puter. You're going to LOVE Windows 7! And, you have me wondering about Phelan's "kinky werewolf-sex" because I don't know if poor Daisy is ready for that yet. snicker snicker

    Now, the chapter itself...
    Phelan - I love the fact that he acts like a normal cocky teenager, but also has the adult wisdom to handle taking care of Remus so well. I don't know if you did it on purpose, or even see it, but have you noticed that you've written him in much the same way JK wrote Harry? He's a good guy, normal teen, forced-Hero. Good job!
    Remus - I am so glad he's home and safe. I grinned like an idiot as he romped with Phelan for the first time. I look forward to more of his reunions, as well as watching Kingsley's wrath on his behalf.
    Molly/Arthur - Great reunion, but she needs to stop giving people that judgmental "fisheye" every time she's unsure.
    Kingsley - smart and wary, but a true friend. I think that technicality will become Phelan's safety, as he is now the boy/wolf who saved Remus Lupin.
    Daisy/Draco - the truest thing she said was that Phelan would be a hero if he'd only been human. I feel so badly for her. I am cheered though in knowing he's close to her and they will be together again very soon. Draco has grown and I thank you for that. He's at least fighting his old beliefs.
    Lucius/Hermione - I truly appreciate that they are so fierce in their fight for Phelan, even if it's mostly for Daisy on Lucius' part. lol And, I had another giggle when I pictured Hermione and her "angry eyes". lol

    So, yeah, I guess I liked that chapter at least a little. :-D Thank you and hugs, HG4eva

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  • From dragongirl on July 09, 2010
    Hey the promise to blow away our lids still on ......... Bring it on! As for this chapter surprise surprise........ Nice job.
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  • From Tanya on July 09, 2010
    Ooh Kingsley's all angry ... Hope Phelan doesn't get put in Azkaban
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  • From ANON - Dawn on July 09, 2010
    Remus is back, and Kings is gonna bust some heads over this mess! Whoooo! and Phelan's such a good li'l pup. Awwww... ^_^

    Glad Draco's back. I agree with a previous poster... young Tom R at Hogwarts is a bit underused... I like him a LOT... and I tend to LOATHE OCs.

    So, we've got two Marauders back, wolf drama, Ministry misdeeds, aftermath of Voldy-redux (and the probably yet-to-come Harry guilt-fest... since he does that...) and oh yeah, Hermione and Lucius spawning still to come. Gotta say, I'm still totally loving this fic.


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  • From angelnomiko on July 08, 2010
    yeaaa the found a loop hole and phelan save remus ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From dragongirl on July 06, 2010
    OMG This story is so entertaining and so much fun with all the twists and turns. Who is going to be in trouble now? The minister or the aurors? Do we have to wait? Yeah! Too bad........
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on July 05, 2010
    So it was Remus!!! Yay and oh good gravy!!!

    Phelan is turning out to be quite the mature and heroic young man. Just wondering what Remus' reaction to being rescued by the son of the one who "made' him with be. Oh, and with Sirius back from the grave...

    Wondering why there hasn't been much from Draco? How's he handling the aftermath of that night?

    Also, I'm curious as to Daisy's attitude toward Lucius. I know she told him to do it and that she is a pretty smart kid but still, she is 13 and even though she understood why Lucius chose his son over her, wouldn't she feel just a tiny bit of resentment toward him for letting Voldemort use the Crucio on her?
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  • From JennyH87 on July 05, 2010
    I'm so loving this story! Its awesome! I should've know who the mysterious werewolf was but I just couldn't figure it out till you said who it was. I'm so glad they found him! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - M Davis on July 05, 2010
    I love this story and wait with baited breath for the next chapter:)
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