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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From voraciousreader on June 27, 2010
    Loved Sev's wake-up call, that was hilarious. Why doesn't somebody point out the fact that Phelan is NOT a lycanthrope, he's a Lycan? the law isn't written for Lycans.
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  • From dragongirl on June 27, 2010
    You love to twist and turn so we can have no idea of what is coming. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on June 23, 2010
    Ok, just so you know, you are pure evil, to leave us like this..... But you know that you deserve hugs, kisses, and cuddles for bringing back Sirius this way, AND making him healthy and youthful again. I'm a little late in reading this latest chapter; I wasn't out reading new stuff lately, and missed the update, but I love it. Simply love it. So I'm back to let you know that I will be looking for another update, soon, I hope.
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  • From ANON - lilashannah on June 21, 2010
    Holy hell in a hand basket..That was Way out there..I loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - drorah on June 21, 2010
    I've been following for months, but have never reviewed before.... but I thought I would give the contest a shot.

    The runes are as follows:

    *naudiz "need"
    *ī(h)waz/*ei(h)waz "yew-tree"
    *gebō "gift"
    *berkanan "birch"

    Okay, so as near as I can work out, the birch is almost like a counterpoint to the yew... because yew is a wood typically symbolizing death and such while birch is a symbol of rebirth. And a need or "taking" something would be the antithesis of a gift. So the birch wand gives the gift of life and rebirth while the yew is an instrument of death and taking.
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  • From fatladysinging on June 20, 2010
    I was a little wary when I started this story- afraid of the overt Mary Sue description. But I'm halfway through what you've written so far, and I love it! I never review before I've caught up with a story, and I'll review again, but I had to say it now before I forget to tell you how much I'm getting into this story. :-)
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  • From ANON - Dawn on June 19, 2010
    First of all, I'm very much enjoying this fic... Despite my skepticism at the initial premise (I tend to hate OFC/OMC fic as they usually veer badly into Mary Sue-ism!), this has been a great ride thus far and I cannot wait to see how it ends!

    As for the rune challenge, the runes in the pic, clockwise from upper left are: Nauthiz, Eihwaz, Berkana, and Gebo. Their individual meanings are detailed here, followed by my analysis of their choice...

    Nauthiz = Delays, restriction. Resistance that leads to strength, innovation, Distress, confusion, conflict, and the power of will to overcome them. Endurance, survival, determination. A time to exercise patience. Recognition of one's fate. Major change. Face your fears.

    Eihwaz = Strength, reliability, dependability, trustworthiness. Enlightenment, endurance. Defense, protection. The driving force to acquire, providing motivation and a sense of purpose. Indicates that you have set your sights on a reasonable target and can achieve your goals. An honest man who can be relied upon.

    Berkana = Birth, general fertility, both mental and physical and personal growth, liberation. Regenerative power and light of spring, renewal, promise of new beginnings, new growth. Arousal of desire. A love affair or new birth. The prospering of an enterprise or venture.

    Gebo = Gifts, both in the sense of sacrifice and of generosity, indicating balance. All matters in relation to exchanges, including contracts, personal relationships and partnerships.

    So, as I read it, your resurrected Sirius is a man of endurance and determination bringing power of will, strength and reliability. He can be relied upon, and brings regenerative power and renewal through his gifts of sacrifice and generosity. His presence restores a balance lost, as indicated by his ability to vanquish Voldemort once and for all, saving Harry and all our fabulous band of (sometimes unlikely) heroes!
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  • From loisalcantara on June 19, 2010
    OH MY GOD!! this chapter was amazing! the mix of emotion i went through was like one huge rollercoaster! it was none stop and oh dear god when Cole was trying to get Snape to get up my heart broke into a million pieces and i began bawling my eyes out. This is just WOW! i cannot wait for the next chapter i'm still on the edge of my seat as to find out how Voldemort possessed Harry. Please keep the chapters coming. This is by far my favourite fan fiction :)
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  • From serinblackmoon on June 18, 2010
    OMG my sides hurt! I laughed waay more then I should have, but it was a great chappie! I found it ironic that Volde gets his ass handed to him by the one man he never thought he would see again. I would have liked to see more of the internal struggle between Harry and Volde, but it's cool. You made it very interesting. I can't wait to see how you explain how Sirius got out of this one!


    Can't wait for the next Chappie!!! Write again soon!

    Lady Serin
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  • From margaritama on June 18, 2010
    well, and the unseen Sirius Black rides again.....how very Templar Knightish of you....mixed with a bit of...are those Norse runes???? Seriously??? Okay...the first, starting top row left to right, means need, then inverted Z is sun, the next row (right to left) is Birkana (or Berkana and I think there might be a third way of writing it) stands for Birch (is this tying to the wand in your story?)...finally, the last rune, the huge X, is gift. So I'm assuming that he is a gift from the sun (light) that appears in time of need and his sword is made of birch (his wand?)....did I mention I'm an archeology nut? Right-o. That's my guess, my darling. :-)

    Oh and faboo chappie. You had me at the Daisy/Draco choice. Boy the outcome was unseen, eh? Really. LOVED IT.
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  • From alina290 on June 18, 2010
    Finally I am able to leave my review. I had tried earlier in the day, but I have no idea what what was wrong either with my internet or with the site. Thank you so much for this last three chapters. I had not had a chance to review each one. I liked the way the conflict took place. I had know idea you would bring back Sirius. Good show.
    Liz
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  • From voraciousreader on June 18, 2010
    I'm not worried about Bella, Harry will take some sort of responsibility for her, it's just his nature. Sirius was a bit of a surprise, I must say, however. Phelan is going to be an impossible patient--he just got out of the infirmary, for heaven's sake. 'Snapelet'--LOL.
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  • From dragongirl on June 18, 2010
    WOW~! Sirus, OMDG that was too cool!
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  • From Citten on June 18, 2010
    sorry i didn't get a chance to review the previous chapter but getting to a computer with working internet all the time is getting to be a chore but enough of me. i did love the other chapater it had a little bit of everything! though i wish the wedding was a little bit more (longer and more of detail) but still lots of fun and enjoyable. this chapter i really loved boy you really got them in a jam didn't you! ;) well i cant wait to see what else is in store for our good guys and our poor newbe bella what will happen to her? well what is our lucius going to do when he gets on his feet! i do hope that there is now pause between the end of this chapter and the beginning of the one you will be posting like real soon! i don't want to miss a thing! :) post soon!
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  • From ANON - April on June 17, 2010
    OMG!!!! poor cole!
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