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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From margaritama on June 17, 2010
    Well, that quite an unseen attack by them all wasn't it? YAY for Sev for realizing what was up! Come on everyone bandy about and kick some Vorry ass! And what's up with Harry? Isn't he fighting in there? And the opening has some unseen character -- I think that's Harry, who was slumbering away.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 16, 2010
    I am sure you are going to get loads of reviews for this piece of work! That was even more horrid than I dreamed it would be. I am glad Severus was able to finally recognize him, even if it was a bit too late. Sigh. Poor Cole. I want to string Voldie up by his (Harry's - sorry Harry) bits and hack off small pieces of him slowly and painfully just for that. I don't know who you are going to have save the day (I'm hoping it's Harry that was waking up in the beginning who will do it again), but they better get a move on! This was fantastic in its action, horror, and methodical pacing. Brava, my dear. Now... FIX THIS! lol Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on June 16, 2010
    I am so curious about who that was in the first part of the chapter. Could it be Harry? Could it be Sirius? Could it be maybe even Draco? Youse being sneaky :P Love it!!!

    Oh man, I felt so bad for everyone. I was especially freaked for Cole and Severus. They are my favorites next to Daisy and Phelan. Still wondering what will happen to Bella too.

    I am really liking all the twists and turns in this fic.
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  • From ANON - lilashannah on June 16, 2010
    Wow! Hell of a good chapter.You have me holding on to the edge of me seat.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on June 16, 2010
    Ok, not a flame, but I really don't like seeing Harry being used like this. Or at least his body. It fits in the context you are writing, but I still am not comfortable with the cruelty to a small, lovable child like Cole. I get that it was meant as a punishment for Severus, but still....

    Ok, I'm done with the expected heartbreak over Harry/Voldie torturing people, we all knew it would happen. We should be expecting it. It's how the psycho got off before, it wouldn't change in the incarnation either......

    Still love the story. Keep updating.....
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  • From voraciousreader on June 16, 2010
    Voldepotter does realize that he is alone, he has managed to place himself in the Wizard's equivalent of a cage match with the people who most want him dead, and he has no way out, even if the rest of the audience is restrained, right? Some Dark Lord--hasn't got the strategic skills for a game of tic-tac-toe. It's a shame if they have to kill Harry's body, but he would certainly understand; after all, offered it up once before. If he kills Lucius' child, He will be ripped limb from limb and it won't be Phelan doing it!
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  • From dragongirl on June 16, 2010
    OMDG What a twist!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From serinblackmoon on June 16, 2010
    Sorry for not reviewing for so long. Been working on my own story lol.

    Wonderful chapter. Great way to reveal that Voldemort lives! lol. Can't wait to see how the group gets out of this one. *evil gleam* But then again, they may not... Bwhahahaha!!!


    Can't wait for the next chappie!!!


    Lady Serin
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  • From ANON - April on June 13, 2010
    lots of plot twist and additions in this one. loved it.
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  • From voraciousreader on June 13, 2010
    Wow, that was a lot of ground to cover in plotting terms. Was it intentional that the reporter's name is an anagram of ' a pest'? I liked that.
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on June 13, 2010
    ***pins and needles time***
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 13, 2010
    I like these moments of normalcy between them. It's nice to have them before everything blows up again. I am so sorry Daisy got in touch with Harry. She's going to feel awful once the truth comes out, poor thing. But, I am sure you will pull them all through somehow. Thank you again, hon! HG4eva
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  • From margaritama on June 13, 2010
    the dress is purty...okay Harry creeps me out. I'm waiting for Lucius to spy something that was so voldemort, I thought for sure the pause and smoke might give it away, he knew him before he became all snake-like, after all. I can't believe no one is seeing a single thing amiss....is all unseen here? come 'on people, take off the effing rose-colored glasses....sigh.

    PS: my only request is that the epilogue or something include and adult Daisy and Phelan with some serious hot GRRRRRRRRR smut. can you imagine that poor boy waiting as long as he does?????
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  • From dragongirl on June 13, 2010
    Wow I can wait for the fight or should I say battle of the minds, because Harry will not go so quietly after all........ LOL
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  • From margaritama on June 12, 2010
    had to read it again...WOW what an unseen smutilicious chapter. and Harry/Vold is just disturbed. when will anyone realize that he's not quite all there or well? it can't go unseen for much longer can it?
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