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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From alina290 on May 26, 2010
    Very interesting chapter. Discoveries are wonderful and really make the story worth reading.
    Liz
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 26, 2010
    So. Harry found his own "Bella"; I wonder how her parents died, and if she's a half-blood or pure-blood...I wonder if Harry will even really care...
    It's up to Daisy and Phalen to figure out how to take care of the "New Dark Lord"? I guess they will be speaking to Lucius and Hermione soon, as well as bringing in the Headmaster....

    Please update again soon.................
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  • From loisalcantara on May 26, 2010
    I have just discovered your fan fiction this morning and have been reading it non stop until now and i must say this fan fiction has me on the edge of my seat and it send chills down my spine every time anything with Harry comes up now that i have discovered that he has been possessed! I really can't wait for you to post up the next chapter and will be eagerly awaiting it. This is one of the best i've read so far with the story line and side stories which blend really well together :) thank you for writing this it really made my day reading your fan fic.
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  • From voraciousreader on May 26, 2010
    Ol' Voldie is a bit predictable, but that isn't a slam on you, dear: most criminals go with what they know rather than trying something original. It's actually quite believable. Loved the twins and Daisy, that was a very good scene. I wonder how Denebola will react when she explains their message? Lucius is gonna absolutely freak when he hears this, and Hermione is gonna be researching exorcisms from now until her kids enter Hogwarts.
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 23, 2010

    Chapter 57: It
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on May 23, 2010
    I was wondering when you would bring back the Centaurs.

    lol at Draco and his sense of humor.

    Are Herms parents going to be a thorn in Lucius' side?
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  • From dragongirl on May 23, 2010
    Even with the turn of events you keep the humor........... Beautiful!
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  • From margaritama on May 23, 2010
    Alrighty, we need to move forward now....Phelan is too hot for words....I can't stand how unseen things are. Please fast forward to 7th year....please. Don't leave it so unseen.

    PS: sorry I've not reviewed, RL has been nuts.


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  • From voraciousreader on May 23, 2010
    At least this time the centaurs are willing to get involved, in a small way. Nice twist.
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  • From ANON - Beth on May 22, 2010
    you better complete this or.... or... or I'll set Lucius on you!!!
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  • From alina290 on May 20, 2010
    I think my review got lost somehow. Thank you so much for this chapter. Harry sure needs to be stronger to fight. I wonder what triggered this change.
    Liz
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  • From AnonymousAndrogyny on May 19, 2010
    Hmm. What a read. I waited until the very end to review, mostly because I didn't want to ask questions that would have been answered in later chapters. But, it's an excellent story, with some slightly aggravating points and turns to it. I rather like Daisy, though sometimes, I believe I was mislead about the fierceness of her character, or perhaps I just misread and injected my own gung-ho violent kick-everyone's-ass version of Miss Melfy. But other than her few moments of weakness (which makes her a believable character), she's awesome. And Phelan...bravo, no words could describe him (there are, of course, tons of awesome words to describe him with, but please excuse my lack of energy to fish them out of my brain.). I can put it like this: at least something good came out of Fenrir Greyback's big bad existence. I was surprised at the progression of Lucius and Hermione's relationship (one day they're getting along, and then a few days later they're flirting and not long after that they're knocking boots like rabbits in heat), but the sex dynamic of their relationship is hot, and at times serves to cement the bond between them. I really like this story! Now! I've got questions...what ever happened to that French Fried Freak that nearly broke Daisy's nose? Perhaps someone shoved their foot so far up his ass his brain got replaced by a rubber sole? Did he get eaten or horribly mauled by a Hippogriff? Or maybe Phelan will show the man the business end of his claws as soon as he gets better (Phelan is going to get better, isn't he?) And, what happened to Rita Skeeter? What, she gets laid off and that's it? No one heckles her or drives her into isolation with no way to get her grubby hands on gossip? Lastly, what about the centaurs? What happened to them? Doesn't Daisy miss them? Don't they miss her? I can't imagine that she builds up a peaceful friendship with them and then forgets they exist! Hmm. Just wondering. Perhaps this is enough review carrots to spoil the plot bunnies? If not...tell the bunnies there's more where that came from.
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 19, 2010

    Chapter 56: Aww, I had a lovely time hearing about Snape and his little son
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  • From ANON - hannahbanana on May 18, 2010
    I liked it!keep writing! PLEEASSEE!! I'm kind of confused about this Harry thing...I thought Voldermort was dead?
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on May 17, 2010
    Crap!!! I'm not sure if my first comment posted!!!

    Welcome back!!!

    I just loved the whole Severus and Cole part. They are too cute. I thought it was great that he wanted to show off his son.

    Am just waiting to see how it goes between Lucius and the in laws...lol...

    Did so not see that coming with Harry. I tell you they have to stay away from the fancy balls and parties.

    All in all a great chapter, can't wait to see how it all goes down.
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