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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From Given2Fly on February 20, 2010
    "Was that your tongue in my mouth?"

    Best. Line. Ever.

    Loooooooove the "sexual tension" between Daisy and Phelan and Hermione is glowing? *insert evil laughter here*

    Have I mentioned that I love you for writing this? Just checking. LoL ;)

    Update again soon, darling!
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  • From Padfootsgrl on February 19, 2010
    they can always push the beds together or enlarge them. lol. loved hermione telling off the shopkeeper. will she figure out she is preggers soon??
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  • From dragongirl on February 19, 2010
    I just love it!!!!!!!!
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  • From margaritama on February 19, 2010
    wonderful...so many unseen and exciting adventures await them. How could Hermione's pregnancy still be unseen by all? And she is preggers isn't she? I hope there's an extended epilogue with Phelan and Daisy smuttness....RAWR!

    Um, why hasn't Draco been banished to stand in the corner yet?
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  • From margaritama on February 19, 2010
    Oh...poor Phelan. Love that underlying dangerousness about him...it's clear he cares for Daisy so much.

    Draco is such a spoiled little brat and I want Lucius to spank him HARD and then make him stand in a corner.

    I can't believe I did see this chapter -- it was unseen by my eyes. SO SORRY, I would have reviewed. :-)
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  • From voraciousreader on February 19, 2010
    maybe Lucius should start investing Phelan's money for him, just in case? Never hurts to have a fall-back. Loved Hagrid's reaction to his tranformation, that was just so Him.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 19, 2010
    YES! Woo hoo!! Go, Hermione! That's the righteous indignation and truth I was looking forward to from her. That was so much better than even what was in my head as a hope! Brava to you!!! Thank you. :-D

    Awwww, her first french kiss. Merlin, I am pathetic. I grinned and aww'ed out loud. lol

    The visit went loads better than I thought it would and I still love myself some McGonagall. :-) I am so relieved the teachers took to him as well as they did. Trepidation he (and I) can handle. lol

    Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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  • From on February 19, 2010
    Glad you updated! Hoping to see more of Phelan and Hogwarts. Lol.
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  • From ANON - HannahBanana on February 18, 2010
    I just started reading your story this morning and i could not stop reading!! It is sooo good!!! I can't wait for your next chapter to be out, i'm so excited!!!
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  • From serinblackmoon on February 16, 2010
    Me thinks Phelan is having emotional issues and self confidence issues. Perhaps their should be a bit of an intervention before Hogwarts begins or it might get messy.

    And I swear Hermione is preggers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know it!!!!!!


    lol great chappy, can't wait for the next one! Post soon!!!


    Lady Serin
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  • From gypsy on February 16, 2010
    Okay, okay (huffing impatiently)! I understand, I must give kudos to get more kibbles.
    Well done! (AS ALWAYS!)
    Is Draco going to come around? How's Luc going to react to Hermione being pregnant? She is, isn't she? More importantly, HOW IS DRACO GOING TO REACT! (Handle them with care, please. I never outgrew my love for the bad boys!) Daisy needs to be the one to put Draco in his place. Soundly, so there can be no doubt in his mind that she is worthy of Luc's attentions. Could we have a scene where Draco becomes aware of exactly what Hermione means to his father? Overhearing or seeing them? I don't expect Happy-Happy-Joy-Joy horse hooey, but at least acceptance reather than the strained tolerance he is enduring and inflicting upon everyone. Maybe Hermione and Luc can help him understand his own demons that are haunting him - something he had to do during his Death Eater days?

    Now, MORE PLEASE?!!! (Oh yeah! Keep up the good work!)
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  • From Padfootsgrl on February 16, 2010
    i like muffin tops.....now i want a blueberry muffin. anyway good chapter.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 16, 2010
    Awww, poor Phelan. I don't know who that man was, but I sincerely hope Hermione is the one to put him in his place. Having her do it will make more of an impression, as she isn't to blame for any of the man's issues, plus she helped "save" them all. I think a boycott of the premises is right up her alley. How dare he?! Arse! I hope Daisy can calm him down enough to let him see that not everyone will act that way. At least I hope they don't. Sigh...

    But, I am REALLY glad to know the story is no where near over. Yay for me. :-) Thanks, luv! HG4eva
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  • From JillianUnleashed on February 16, 2010
    hello,

    draco isn't reformed yet, but i hope it happens soon. thanks for posting again and i can't wait to see how things go. Phelan needs to learn that no man is an island.
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  • From Given2Fly on February 16, 2010
    Pobre Phelan! I just wanted to kick that restaurant owner's arse.
    Draco is a douche.
    Hermione is being a cheeky little monkey, isn't she? Those pregnancy hormones kicking in I suppose. ;)
    *points to self* thinks Phelan and Daisy are cute too. ^___^
    Update soon, darling. It makes my day!
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