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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 02, 2009
    A perfect title, a lovely update, great costumes, and the blush of first love... wonderful! Fenrir and crew...$@%@^%$^#@^@#%! Looking forward to more really soon. :-) Sorry you only got 4 reviews, but I am sure people are still reading and enjoying. I know I am! HG4eva
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  • From jessirose85 on December 02, 2009
    I thought chapter 34 was great..I hope that Lucius and Hermione will get married eventually in this

    Please add ch 35 soon
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on December 02, 2009
    This story is amazing.
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  • From Given2Fly on December 01, 2009
    Brilliant, as usual, love. Fantastic job. I honestly can't wait to check every day and see if you've updated and it just puts a HUGE smile on my face when you do! Keep up the great work!!
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  • From voraciousreader on December 01, 2009
    Ok, so I'm not all that regular with my reviews--I locked up the manticore, didn't I? Sorry: been working sixteen hours days lately and barely managing to keep up with my favorite stories. I do love the way you've set the scene: party-goers below, monsters above, and poor Phelan in the middle. Here's hoping Hermione's aim hasn't deteriorated over the years.
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 30, 2009

    Chapter 33: I adore that Lucius wears reading glasses
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 29, 2009
    I guess because I finished my other story a while ago, I didn't get that message. I am glad you mentioned it (although I can't find it on this darn site) so I would be prepared when I start posting my next one. Thanks for that. In your next Author's Note can you explain where to find the answers to the reviews; ie: where to find them in the forums? Again, thanks!

    Now, that was so sweet. I love the blush of first love between them, especially when juxtaposed with the comfortable feelings given off by Hermione and Lucius. I fear what Fenrir has planned, but I am sure Lucius, Hermione, Harry (with his new respect of Lucius), Daisy (with her nature magic), and Phelan (with his new interest in Daisy, protective "dog" nature, pride in himself, as well as his hatred of his father) will make mincemeat of him! I look forward to more really soon and thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From margaritama on November 29, 2009
    I think Fenrir will get a surprise.....I'm surprised Phelan didn't smell or sense him. LOVED the first kiss. And boy I can't wait to see what Phelan is like if anyone dares to threaten Daisy. I suspect Alpha male wouldn't suffice.

    And Lucius is such an idiot. I think he cares more for Phelan than he even realizes. Debt or no debt, Phelan is there to stay.
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  • From ANON - alina290 on November 29, 2009
    I am so glad I caught chapter on the first day of it being updated. I know what you mean about the forums. Most of us do not like to have to log in more than three times to get were we want to be. If you wish to respond to my reviews send them to me to my yahoo lizalya13@yahoo.com. I am also in facebook and LJ. I liked this first kiss very much. I bet Daisy is in cloud nine. I know I would be or was a long time ago. To tell you the truth I cannot even remember my first kiss it was so long ago. Ohhh.. well to be young again and in love. "Just sighs"
    Liz
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  • From ANON - alina290 on November 23, 2009
    I did enjoy both chapters very much. I thank you so much for mentioning me on the previous. There are times I miss the updates. My laptop has been on the fritz and so sometimes it does not work the way I want it to. I enjoyed the coupled joining very much are well as the fellatio. Great idea on Hermione's part to wake him up with a good sucking. Very good lemons all around. The mild one between Phelan and Daisy. I do not think you intended to make it so for them yet since they are so young, but it sounded a little limy you know.
    Liz
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 20, 2009

    Chapter 32: Our Phelan certainly has the makings of a prime stud. Daisy is concerned for her waistline, but perhaps Phelan likes a little cushioning
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  • From margaritama on November 20, 2009
    Hmm: chocolate chip cookies? Lucius cookie? what a choice?

    LOVED the Phelan and Daisy interaction....dear lord that boy is going to be a heck of a man...their relationship is parallel to Lucius/Hermione but so much more "innocent".
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  • From serinblackmoon on November 20, 2009
    Awwww. I smell a mutual crush between Phelan and Daisy!!!! How adorable!!!!!


    Now as for the lemons, I can't wait for Lucius to reveal his fantasies for Hermione and see her reactions. I love her wake up call for him and that it's helping them to spur their relationship forward. Hope to read another chapter soon

    Lady Serin
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 18, 2009
    Well... um... well... DAYUM!!!!! Is it hot in here? Need a drink now! Simply delicious! Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From Given2Fly on November 18, 2009
    Once again, dearest, you haven't disappointed!! I ADORE the little interaction with Phelan and Daisy...pure 'innocence' at it's finest! Update again soon, won't you? It makes my day when I see that you've updated. ^___^



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