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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From voraciousreader on October 29, 2009
    I don't throw bricks, that would be rude. I throw rabid manticores, and I hate cliffies when you're getting to the good part! (Pouts and peforms temper tantrum worthy of a four-year old) Loved the slow build up, so I guess I can't have it both ways, can I? Poor Phelan, I hope he finds a cold shower soon. LOL.
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 29, 2009

    Chapter 29: So many answers and explanations for me
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  • From distinctlyME on October 29, 2009
    Wow......*sizzle sizzle*


    I think thats the most I can say about this steamy little teaser! or maybe I could add a RAWRRRR in there too! ;)

    So sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time! Not a cool thing for me to do! I hope you can forgive! I've been terribly busy, and so although I read, I don't really review anymore. :(
    I must say, I'm enjoying this more and more. And I'm excited for this delicious next chapter to come available!

    xoxo
    dM
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  • From Citten on October 29, 2009
    The only way that this cliff is going to piss me off is if you DONT update like in the next....24-48 hours!!! i totally love things so far! :) i am dying to see how things go and i am going to go crazy you do dont get us the rest and soon! :) poor phlan boy they where making it really hard for the boy and no-one knew. ;) so get with the updating!
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  • From chrisdavis on October 29, 2009
    I just started reading this story today because with WIP's I like wait for the author to get some chapters in before I start reading. This story is great! I'm torn between Laughing at Snape, lusting after Lucius, cheering for Daisy and Hermione and wanting to take that stick in Draco's butt and shove it further in till he has splinters in his teeth!!!! And Greyback has got to go! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From chrisdavis on October 29, 2009
    Ohhhhkayy! Wait, I'll leave a proper review when I finish laughing hysterically at the picture of Severus with a toddler and a stinky diaper!!!!
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  • From dragon88 on October 29, 2009
    lol I thought it was amusing that Phelan knew Hermione was aroused! Another evil cliff hanger, your right though it just makes me wanna read more! update soon ^_^
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  • From serinblackmoon on October 28, 2009
    awww poor Phelan. Poor Hermione. Doesn't Lucius realize that by telling Daisy for him, she has made Daisy trust him even more? I swear men can't think well at all. Ah well. I suppose I could explain it to him... After tying him to a bed of course lol J/k j/k

    Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great work!

    Lady Serin
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 28, 2009

    Chapter 28: Lucius could see Phelan
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 28, 2009

    Chapter 27: Crafty Lucius maneuvers Phelan into
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 28, 2009

    Chapter 26: If Halfbreeds are screwed at shopping, Diagon Alley should have gone out of business by now, the way the wizarding world is intermingling with the Muggles. I feel sorry for the racist attitude of some in that world; so insular and reactionary. Didn
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 28, 2009

    Chapter 25: Sulks
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 28, 2009

    Chapter 24: Lucius has good cause to be suspicious of Phelan; in this case Hermione may be putting Daisy in danger by not acknowledging Phelan
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  • From ANON - jkw625 on October 25, 2009
    Loving this story. It could use a dedicated Beta to catch of few misused words and phrases repeated in the same sentence or paragraph but even the very best authors need that sort of assistance. Sort of like polishing a diamond. What I am same is you have a well cut multifaceted diamond that could use a tiny bit of polish to bring out its brilliance. I adore your new characters. Daisy and Phelan are delightful. Snape as a daddy is a hoot. As for LM/GH ...what can I say. Bring on the gala :)
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  • From alina290 on October 25, 2009
    She should not have said anything. Now he will have her for more than what she is worth.
    Liz
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