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Reviews for Just Around the Riverbend

By : Kooldragon400
  • From AndreaLorraine on January 23, 2009
    Great idea for their meet-cute...or not so cute, hehe. You are writing Lucius well so far. I think once he figures out how to handle a girl, he will be a wonderful guardian. I, for one, love it when fanon gives him a daughter, because he spoils them rotten and they end up being his little princess.

    I think Daisy will discover that her guardian is also lonely, and she'll spot the chemistry between Lucius & Hermione before they do. Perhaps Daisy has inherited the Slytherin tendency for meddling... ;)

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  • From Heidi191976 on January 23, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I am glad that Hermione was at the book shop or Daisy might have cried because Lucius wouldn't have known what to do.
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  • From Carine on January 23, 2009
    Hi,
    Men are idiots!well I can undersign that.My hubby and myself have two girls.He was freaking out at the thought that I could not be home when they get their period.Sometimes he's a perfect dunderhead,but even though I endlessly love him....sigh...
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  • From ANON - amy skydancer on January 23, 2009
    ...as i realize i just read all the chapters in one foul swoop.....i better review or I'll REALLY feel bad...

    LOVED the timing of Daisys need for help. and i think i scared one of my rabbits as I hooted ( quite loudly ) at the Book ABOUT rocks.....I find it very easy to visualize your story..Lucius' face as the realization of Orphans = sad helping orphans = happy....i saw a big lightbulb float over his head! (course..that could have been one of the house elves...lol)


    I'm owling You a bag of Plot Bunny Treats to keep them healthy and active, cause this story is AWESOME!!!
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  • From ANON - Ash on January 23, 2009
    LOVE this story! Poor Daisy...but wow that would be funny to see! Normally I wait until a story is either complete or has around 10 chapters before I read but I'm glad I caught on to this one soon!
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  • From margaritama on January 23, 2009
    That was the best encounter ever -- sizing each other up to kill each other was funny. And then enter little Daisy who is completely OBLIVIOUS to everything. Getting her period was a brilliant move and Hermione would of course help her. Lucius should just hire her to help tutor Daisy - since Hermione has no job. Surely she can complain about her bosses treatment? She was being sexually harassed by that other idiot. I really like how you had them meet at the bookstore.
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  • From ANON - dolphindreamer on January 21, 2009
    Hey! This looks wonderful so far, I'm glad that you are keeping Daisy real she should still be feeling pain and such and I was kinda worried you weren't going to. Hermione is wonderful and I really like the Harry in this too. Can't wait for an update, do you have a notification list? If you do please add me to it! My e-mail's dolphins_dream_too@hotmail.com Keep it up!
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  • From CoCoM on January 20, 2009
    Hmm, I am not certain how I feel about Daisy yet....I guess we shall see. And I hope to see Hermione in the next chapter!
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  • From carha on January 20, 2009
    Poor kid, she must be really overwhelmed. Another good chapter hun, and yes, that was a fast enough update lol :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2009
    Once again I must give you 10/10 xxxx

    Brillant and I cannot wait to see how Hermione is introduced in this story xxx
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  • From margaritama on January 20, 2009
    What a strange, sweet girl....she seems so much more composed and older than her years. Actually, I think she and Hermione will get along so well. In fact, so much so that I suspect Lucius won't like that much. It seems Daisy doesn't care about blood status. I'm enjoying the ride so far. Am wracking my brain trying to figure out the meeting of our the two and can't find a right situation....can't wait what you have in store. Should be interesting and I'm fairly certain it might be tied to Hermione's compassion and ability to relate to those in need (in this case obviously Daisy but subtely Lucius).

    Lucius' loneliness is surprising - he is feeling things, he must be losing his mind. LOL - and it seems he's been a bit abstinent??? Poor (or lucky) Hermione - eventually anyway. ROFL.

    PS: I agree about poppa Lucius - he doesn't like to share or he is possessive. Still....nice idea! :-D
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 20, 2009
    A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From voraciousreader on January 20, 2009
    Ah, poor kid. I hope she is strong-willed, or the stress is gonna kill her. Poor Lucius, as well. Good chapter.
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  • From Ithilwen on January 20, 2009
    I would be in awe if I ever went into a manor like that too.. I can only imagine how it looks hehe.

    And I hope Lucius will warm some up to her.. She's new and alone with a pretty much complete stranger for a cousin. And she's in a new continent and country all together. I feel bad for her!

    I wonder when our heroine will come into the picture here!
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  • From Carine on January 20, 2009
    Hi,
    I love this story soooo much.I even went through my pedegre to see if I were by chance related to the Malfoy line...But :no,so I guess I just have to stay where I am now.
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