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By : Mountainleaf
  • From ANON - hermioneSNAPEfan1983 on November 17, 2014
    please tell me she doesnt have sex with someone else and gets pregnant by them?? also why cant severus have children??? maybe magick can fix it???
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on August 31, 2011
    is the potion he drank the reason she is pregant with twins like with IVF that can happen too the maybe having more than one baby? or is it just out of chance she is having twins and the twins has nothing to do with the potion he drank???
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on August 31, 2011
    how come severus is infertilal unable to have children? what happend to cause this and why didnt he fix it probally in chapter 7 in this story?? also why didnt snape know he was infertilal unable to have children untill he married hermione and started trying to have a baby with her????
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on August 31, 2011
    Ginny curled up tightly against her husband and drifted off to sleep.

    Across the hallway Ginny and Harry lay awake listening. They had heard most of the conversation and were hoping that the potion worked as well. It was terrible to see Hermione suffer that way. When quiet was finally heard through out the house Ginny and Harry went to sleep as well.


    you make a mistake surely you mean Hermione (not Ginny) curled up tightly against her husband and drifted off to sleep

    as ginny was awake with harry and listing to what hermione and severus were saying and doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on August 31, 2011
    did the fake cock in severus ass virbarte aswell?? if not hermione should cast as spell to make it vibrate too!!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 20, 2009
    Nice and interesting little story. Off to read the sequal.

    Tiffany
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 17, 2009
    This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Make sure you mark this one as completed since it is finished.
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  • From mamabear52 on January 16, 2009
    Great ! Can't wait 'till you get the sequel out. But one little thing, somehow I just don't see Severus Snape saying the word ''kids'' when referring to his children. He would most definitely say, children. What do you think ?
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  • From dreamer24 on January 16, 2009
    I loved your little story and I look forward to reading about their lives with children. I am sure twins are going to be fun.
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  • From crssmnc on January 16, 2009
    oh I hope you are not finished. I want to see how Severus reacts. Great Fic.
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  • From dreamer24 on January 16, 2009
    Very good chapter, dear. I am looking forward to reading about what happens with our couple. Here's hoping that she conceives.
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  • From on January 16, 2009
    Give that woman a baby!!!! Please its killing me that she can't have one damn it.... In fact give her several... But great story!!! But please for the love of Dumbledore give them a baby or twins!!!! Snape twins oh lord that would be great!!!!
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  • From dreamer24 on January 15, 2009
    I really like this and I hope that you continue it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 15, 2009
    This is excellent. I look forward to reading more. I think it would be great if Hermione could get pregnant just once.
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  • From mamabear52 on January 15, 2009
    Well don't keep us in suspense ! Hurry ! Hurry ! We need more ! We are a thirsty bunch of readers. Keep 'em comin'. This is so good so far. Can't wait to read the rest. How many more chapters can we expect ??
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