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Reviews for Off Inheritances and Smells

By : blackwhiteroses
  • From sanda on January 18, 2009
    I like it
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  • From Nikte on January 15, 2009
    Thanks for the explanation about the prophecy, you just earned a bunch of chocolate chips cookies from me lol. I loved this chapter, I think it was really funny and at the same time really hot. I just have one complaint, could you please, pretty please, make your chapters a little bit longer, I'm a greedy reader lol.
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  • From slashlover on January 15, 2009
    Could you tell me when you update? veelagirle@yahoo.com

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  • From Mystique887 on January 15, 2009
    Hmm... I just got done reading chapter 3. I understand that English is not your native language, but there are still ways to make sure you get all the errors out of your text. I would recommend a beta or something. Anyways, I like the potline, some parts are rather silly and some of the characters are rather OOC not sure if this is intentional or not but it's still cute! I'm off to read the next few chapters.

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  • From crazy4sex41582 on January 15, 2009
    love how snape is keep it up.
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  • From alaine1910 on January 15, 2009
    Very cool - Great idea more please
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  • From Nikte on January 15, 2009
    Hi really like your story, I think the general idea is great and original. Love how you explained the reason for Severus to be at Hogwarts, even when he hates so much to teach. Will Severus be veela royalty or something like that, or why was it predicted that his mate will be younger? About the Golden Couple, I think they should suffer of excess of fame, which drive them apart, and then the truth should come out so they are ridiculed by everyone, it will also be lovely if they recieved constant howlers from Molly. Well, they are just a few ideas, hope they are helpful. xoxo
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  • From silverqueenbee on January 14, 2009
    Poor Snape---I think he may actually throw a wild-eyed hissy fit! Fabulous job. More please!!!
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  • From mumimeanjudy on January 14, 2009
    Why would the deatheaters still be after Harry? If just about everyone believes that Ron and Hermione killed Voldemort, wouldn't THEY be the deatheaters' targets, rather than Harry?

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  • From silverqueenbee on January 14, 2009
    The Golden Couple needs to be brought down a couple of pegs. Great start! Write more pretty please....I LOVE inheritance fics!!
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  • From llyoung on January 14, 2009
    I would rather Harry be a very powerful wizard as opposed to a creature (or at least be a very powerful wizard creature) and the golden couple should pay and be exposed for the weak useless things they are. I liked Veracity's ideas (the first reviewer for the story). Thanks for the start of what looks like a very enjoyable story.
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  • From neela1954 on January 14, 2009
    I would like to see harry as either a veela or a high
    elf. something to make the entire wizarding world sitr-up and really take notice. please let me know when
    you update.
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  • From mumimeanjudy on January 14, 2009
    Okay, there really isn't much to go on here. If Voldemort is gone, why did Harry have to return to the Dursleys'? How did he end up back in the cupboard under the stairs? Has Sirius been cleared?

    As for Ron and Hermione, I think they should be exposed for the liars and backstabbers that they are in the most public and humiliating way possible.

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  • From sanda on January 14, 2009
    good story,
    Should I let Harry become some kind of creature? yes

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  • From Veracityrules on January 14, 2009
    Right, first reviewer, so I get to call the shots! Just kidding ;)

    Right, here are my suggestions for this fic. Scrap the creature fic, great in certain scenarios but combine a power surged Harry with serious revenge on the "golden-couple" and you've got yourself a winner. An extremely powerful Harry should be sure to put the jumped up, self important gits in their place instead of the tired old "rare and treasured" magical creature bla bla bla...

    Maybe add in a suspected Voldemort return, expectations of the Golden-couple to vanquish him once again but oops they can't for some weird reason, humph... I wonder why? Er... because they didn't in the first place!

    Sorry, plot bunny just hopped out there and got carried away.

    BTW, great story you have started here, love it so far.
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