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By : Digitallace
  • From Annecia89 on October 21, 2014
    So good!!
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  • From ANON - FigmentedReality on July 21, 2010
    Usually I don't review stories, but this is for sure a keeper.

    For one thing, the pace of the story is perfect. There isn't an inundation of detail that many stories have. I mean, even though I love symbolism, personification, and all that literary magic that many authors use, I don't need to know that the table is made of wood and that it's 5 meters across. This story diverges from mere detail.

    Another thing is your use of character development and plot. It is simply riveting that I can see (almost phyisically!) the character's growth. You blow up Draco and Harry and make them completely ROUND characters. They are changed by conflict. I like this. Plus, I have a renewed sense of attachment for the characters. Storywise, although you have a storyline that many other authors use, few hone up to your level of command it. You make the story your own and each chapter feels new and quite refreshing.

    Thank you for a great read. :]
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  • From ANON - arachnidman123 on September 09, 2009
    god this story really drew me in!
    only a few problems: you wrote that Draco thought he was straight until he got the idea in his head to kiss Harry; but then later you mention that he 'hadn't been able to look at another wizard since', and then Narcissa reveals she 'became aware of his proclivities and cancelled his engagement with Pansy'....
    so, i was heartbroken initially when you introduced Luke, because i wanted to beat Draco up for consciously giving another man who he doesn't love, all of his firsts and rubbing it in Harry's face...gah! so petty and unnecessary and just asking for him to deeply regret hus actions later on... But i guess if he'd been with other guys before the introduction of Harry as his 'one and only', I don't hate him as much...he doesn't seem as childish and retaliatory, and more as a person seeking a bandaid resolution to his devastation.
    That rant being said, I really did enjoy immersing myself in this story- it was very well written :D
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  • From automatikjoy on August 02, 2009
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    GLORIOUS!!!!
    I was so happy to see the cute fluffy ending
    after all that angst lol.
    Kudos!

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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2009
    Awwwwwwww!!!!!!


    Also, through the rainbow to a magic glittery world beneath? That is single handedly the mushiest piece of fluff I've ever read!!! lol

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From vampirekisses on July 26, 2009
    So good!
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  • From ANON - yaoiObsessed on July 24, 2009
    awwww, what a fluffy happy ending. Loved it! I'm so happy those two are finally happy and are going to get married. I look forward to your next story, and hope it's just as good and suspenseful. But your warning scares me, about you being evil and for us readers to not get so used to fluffy and happy endings... O.O
    Well, as long as it is good and Harry ends up with Draco eventually, I'm fine with it. Looking forward to more, and i wish you good luck on it!! : )
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  • From ANON - Iconic on July 24, 2009
    We all need a little fluff once in awhile. This was great; I've been following it from the begining and I can hardly believe it's over. I think the best harry-draco fics are like this; angsty and full of schemes and the inability to express emotions. well, fantastic, now I'll go read another of yor brilliant stories.
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  • From ANON - akahimena on July 24, 2009
    Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I loved this ending. It seems fitting that Draco proposed to Harry and even sweeter that they were both on their knees. I loved every chapter of this story and I can't wait for you next one. ::hugs:: Ugh I love this ending. Great job!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 24, 2009
    It was rather sickeningly sweet. But I'm sure they have much suffering elsewhere so a nice ending is fine every once in a whle.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 24, 2009
    Love this!
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  • From serenagold on July 19, 2009
    EEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Oh I'm so freaking happy for them!!! =^^=
    On one hand, I'm excited that this story is continuing... on the other hand, I'm filled with dread regarding what ever misfortune for the two of them you have planned.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From automatikjoy on July 14, 2009
    AW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVED THIS FLUFFY little chapter lol
    it was too cute

    so its ending soon??? :(

    update???
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  • From xheartxcorexemox on July 14, 2009
    LOVE IT.
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  • From ANON - nini on July 14, 2009
    ::hugs:: I love this chapter. I am so glad Harry hasn't lost his family! I think it's too cute when Draco was at the restaurant and realizes his "mistake" but Harry didn't give him grief about it. Harry is divine at the end... such a proposal XD
    Brava!
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