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Reviews for His Alone

By : mollycrown
  • From Shiv5468 on January 18, 2009
    OOh very nice.
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  • From ANON - tutorlib on January 18, 2009
    Wow, This is a great story! I really want to read more and... more of it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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  • From nastygrl on January 18, 2009
    OH! This was soo hot! And awesome! I loved how you set the scene, how you portrayed Hermione as a lonely and a little outside it all, and Snape leaving in the morning. That Snape wasn't some love god (although I think he is) made it better, more real.

    Great job!
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  • From ANON - ABC123 on January 18, 2009
    Great one-shot. Good glimpse into Hermione's head.
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  • From jddammann on January 18, 2009
    Loved this one and looking forward to the next!
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  • From ApollinaV on January 17, 2009
    Wow. Hot. Left me breathing heavily.

    What a way you have with smut.

    But what a delicious chapter story this could be. I already see an immediate conflict that could be interesting to explore. She's pinned her hopes/dreams/asipirations on him. She wants to be his and none other. Yes, I get that she says she'll be his for as long as he wants her, but he's made no declarations of the same. I worry about the 'clinging virgin' factor. I read nothing in this fic that hinted at an emotional committment from Severus or a desire to continue it beyond a desire to take the other uncharted territory (which is hot). He's a man in emotional upheval from terminating his employment. Oh there are so many avenues to explore. Please say the next story will tackle some of these fascinating angles. Oh beautiful angst. And you write it so well.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 17, 2009
    Their discovery of one another was hot, sweet, touching and perfect. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2009
    dont you dare leave this a one-shot story..this has so many ways it could end, and i think a long story with a happy ending could be in its future..great story by the way, loved it.
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  • From dreamer24 on January 16, 2009
    I definately liked this. It was so well written and had my attention from the start. I am greatly looking forward to reading what else you have to write.

    -Amber
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on January 16, 2009
    Wow! NOW THAT'S A FIC!!!!!! That's what I'm talkin' about! You are fabulous! Very good!
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  • From pickles87 on January 16, 2009
    Encore!
    Encore!
    Encore!
    Encore!
    Encore!

    Thank you for writing a delightful one shot.
    It makes me wonder why her boys haven't come looking for her yet.
    But we all know they wouldn't expect to find her with their former Potions Master.
    Or are they to involved with some other females - having to much fun to care about their "best friend."
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  • From pandabear on January 16, 2009
    I don't think I've ever read something so intimately written, I got chills (among other things) just reading. Brava!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 16, 2009
    This was a great one-shot. I loved it.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Myrna13 on January 16, 2009
    WOW!! :D Your story is fantastic!! Really; I love it! The scene when they are lying in the grass: BRAVO! You've made my day with this hot one-shot. I really hope you will do another chapter, as you said. Thank you for giving us a such good story :)
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  • From theeloquentquill on January 16, 2009
    Um, damn. *fans self*


    Seriously, wow.


    I loved the entire thing. I loved how they were just laying there rubbing circles on each other... and the sex... holy fuck.

    Can't wait to find out what happens next :]

    I'll be on the look out for the chapter where she loses her "other virginity" lol and I def think this should turn into a longer story... but thats up to you, obviously.


    Brilliant story :]
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