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Reviews for 9 months

By : Mountainleaf
  • From mamabear52 on January 23, 2009
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 23, 2009
    This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - KittenJ on January 23, 2009
    Good ideas, but it was way too rushed. Try spacing the main events a bit more. I would suggest finding a beta. There were a lot of little errors, such as the word coma being spelled comma. Just constructive criticism, I did like the story, I just wish you had taken a little more time with it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 22, 2009
    An excellent chapter. I hope that Voldemort is dead for good now. I think that his loyal followers just proved that they are really cowards by running away instead of fighting. I hope that Hermione and Severus will both be alright. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on January 21, 2009
    good chapter
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 21, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 20, 2009
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Severus will be able to find and protect Hermione and the babies before something happens to them. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 19, 2009
    A great chapter. I hope that Hermione's nightmare doesn't come true. If Voldemort has returned, I hope that the babies will both be alright. I don't think she could handle it if her son would die and her daughter would be taken from her. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 18, 2009
    These two chapters were incredible. I think that Severus did the right thing by destroying the photo album. He needs to focus on his family with Hermione. Hopefully they won't fight anymore. I am glad that he is going to go with her to visit Harry, Ginny, and their son.

    I think that the twins should be a boy and a girl. For the names, maybe Serenity Grace and Samuel Sebastian.
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on January 17, 2009
    i would have say scine the new lexicon book dose not say what happen to crookshanks or any sites online until jk rowling says what happen to him you can say what ever you want about what you think happen to crookshankes after book 7 and i love both of your stoires so far.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 17, 2009
    A wonderful start. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on January 16, 2009
    i think severus needs to take the album with his and lily's pics in and put in a box and not look at them again. and yes hermione would very upset to know that in some way severus has not let lily and he needs to by putting the pics away and not really looking at them again.
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