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Reviews for Hidden Obession

By : Sanguinea
  • From ANON - Kara on April 04, 2009
    This is a great story and I would like to see it continued.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 23, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Thisbe on January 21, 2009
    Please continue this fanfic! I can't wait to read how his obsession for Hermione will progress.
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  • From EnteralDarkness on January 19, 2009
    Love it!! Can't wait for more to come!! Update soon! Please and thank you!!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on January 19, 2009
    Hi! Ok...so let me see if I can get my rather jumbled...Im in the middle of writing and plot bunnies are attacking me in droves....thoughts into something understandable. First off, I will admit I was a bit hesitant to have a peek when I saw the Minor warning, If it's with an older character I prefer her to be of age or at least 17, but I looked anyhow and am glad I did. I was relieved to see that your Severus wasnt attracted to a child, but the potential woman he saw inside her. I like that his obsession wasnt sexual but it was more of an intellectual attraction.


    I think that if the muse directs you further that you have a story here worth exploring. But I know that sometimes she doesnt take you any deeper than that and that is perfectly ok too. I will keep an eye open however, just in case you decide to dig a little deeper into the tale.


    Happy Writing!!!
    S_G
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  • From theeloquentquill on January 18, 2009
    Wow. Very good :) you should have a chapter for each year at least... Then maybe a ton for once he gets her or something like that LOL


    Very good chapter :)
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  • From sdemelo on January 18, 2009
    i'm going with more little tidbits. This possibly stuff is definitely not allowed ;-)
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