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Reviews for To Suffer a Veela

By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From RynStar15 on June 18, 2009
    I love this veela fic! Keep it up!
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  • From margaritama on June 17, 2009
    "He was confident however, that he could curb those instincts with sexual dominance." What a very telling line.

    So glad you're picking this up. Love the contrast between the emotions he feels versus the savage frustration he's felt at having to wait for so long to have her. I love how she's still strong but at his mercy.

    One small thing - you keep noting that he "drug" her with him...its actually "dragged" - "drug" means he sedated her with...well...drugs (and in essence he did that with his pheromones as well). LOL - I think you mean he pulled her behind him, hence "dragged". :-) Just a small piece of con-crit/feedback. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating!
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  • From elibdally on June 11, 2009
    You ever going to update?

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  • From jaceni50 on April 29, 2009
    Hey, interesting story so far. Hope you continue it.
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  • From Sumhope on March 13, 2009
    I liked this... hope you keep it going.
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  • From elibdally on February 02, 2009
    Wow. A new Veela fic. FAntastic. I honestly thought that you are no longer a part of the fiction world since I haven't seen anything from you in months. Like I said before, you are my inspiration...the wheels in my head are starting to turn. I was hoping you would write a sequal to Black Mistake Draco/Hermione style.

    Anyway, as always I thought your fic was greately written and to the point. Hope you won't keep us waiting too long!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2009
    I just wanted to say that this reminded me of Malfoy's Mate, a fic which I really enjoy since it is over veelas and youve written it beautifully and I hope you continue this as the time progresses :) Thanks for updating while you have such a hectic schedule, school does it in for me as well :(
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  • From jacqui on January 23, 2009
    I LOVE where you are going with this. And Hermione's fear and frustration with the whole Veela concept I wonderful. I read Malfoy's Mate also and was frustrated that it wasn't finished so I hope you continue this story. I really like all your work and send my good thoughts to you. I hope your muse comes back as I can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From Citten on January 22, 2009
    okay i am totally loving this story!!!! i am so very looking forward to this story! i will be watching for the other stories to be updated but in the mean time i am totally loving the distraction of this story! :) i love the beginning and i will be waiting for more i do hope that it is soon! :)
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  • From mlui on January 22, 2009
    Very nice start to a Veela fic...I'm anxiously waiting for an update for "After Midnight"...I hope your writer block passes, so you'll be able to update soon! =)
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  • From bananasforyou on January 21, 2009
    wow something different!
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  • From nonentity on January 21, 2009
    I like that she does whatever he says because her senses are overwhelmed and drugged. I also like that he's perfectly willing to use his veela abilities on her. Explaining the two head boys and two head girls isn't necessary. Also, why would they let the graduating class repeat that year and not give that option to students from other years?
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  • From margaritama on January 21, 2009
    HOT DAMN - WOW - what a way to kick off a new story. This is so good. Please continue and finish (when you feel ready) -- I say that cause so many Veela fics are started but never finished.

    Can't wait for more
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  • From CharlotteBlack on January 21, 2009
    This looks like it could be the start of a really good veela fic. I hope there is more to come soon :)
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  • From voraciousreader on January 21, 2009
    I love Veela fics! this one looks pretty good. More, please, whenever you're ready.
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