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Reviews for A Fitting End

By : bibliobibuli17
  • From WesleyY7 on February 08, 2009
    That is so great! So Neville's mom is the one to put an end to Bellatrix? Awesome!

    Chapter 1 - Dark and gross! Loved your crazy Bellatrix and you tricked me because I thought it was Neville who was being tortured first and then he died. I didn't realize it was more than one chapter and I was thinking how truly dark this was.

    Chapter 2 - Aw, I loved how the trio has become six. The Neville/Luna moments were very nice and yes a relief after the biting off the tongue/burning flesh of Chapter 1.

    Chapter 3 - Great action chapter! Wow! I loved how Neville thought Snape would be okay with Remus. I'm thinking Snape probably toyed with Lupin a bit before he revealed his identity. And Kingsley! Wow! Him shooting off killing curses right and left was hardcore. I loved how Neville just charged at Bella. Awesome. " her frail, Azkaban-nurtured body. " Great descriptive phrase!!

    So I've read all four of your stories, loved all four of them, and am amazed at the differences. You can write so many genres. I'll be excited when you decide to write a huge HP fanfic epic to encorporate them all!
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