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Reviews for The Heart\'s Desire

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Tenar10r on February 05, 2009
    I liked this a lot. :)
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  • From gwaelinn on January 31, 2009
    Really loved this! The situations she 'popped' into were great! And Snape's response to it...so very...well, Snapish!
    Well done~
    Gwaelinn
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  • From ANON - AngelBaby on January 31, 2009
    What do you mean 'It may not stay up"? Don't you dare take it down, it's now my second fav fic of yours after The Bond. I know, I know... I haven't reviewed in an age and the first time I do, I have a whinge. Well as a huge fan of you I get to whinge.
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  • From DarqueHart on January 28, 2009
    Don't take it down! It's cute, it's H O T. I love seduction and so much written anymore is more Slam, Bam... The idea of a drunken-cast spell, and dropping out of the ether is a good one.

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  • From ApollinaV on January 28, 2009
    I love the kid who sees a nearly nekkid Hermione on his Headmaster's desk and wants to stick around. That was frickin' hilarious. And Hermione just 'popping' in wherever... fantastic. Especially the shower, even if it just prolonged the UST. And when he caved in, that was pitch perfect.

    What I liked best about this though was that it was a full and complete thought and developed story. When it ended, I was happy and not ready to whine, 'what happens next,' like far too many one-shots. Thank you for that.

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  • From Cliobella on January 26, 2009

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  • From triz on January 26, 2009
    loved the story! it had a good dose of humor in it. love, love, loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2009
    It was a great oneshot xxx

    Brillant writing as always xx
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  • From vintagejgc on January 26, 2009
    I loved this! It was such a sweet story- and VERY hot (I would expect nothing less from you)
    I got to the end wanting more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2009
    I loved this story! I prefer Severus to be just the way you wrote him. Please leave it up... I like to revisit favorites from time to time!
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  • From cnor9602 on January 25, 2009
    You can't take this down. It was wonderful. Gives those of us who wonder if there is anyone out there for us a little bit of hope that it isn't just fairy tale princesses who are happy in the end. Another wonderful effort that is truly appreciated.
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on January 25, 2009
    I really, really liked this, a brilliant story, very well written and with a excellent plot. I am always happy to see a story written by you, and I was not dissepointed!
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  • From ANON - Kristy on January 25, 2009
    Do you ever have a bad day? Honestly? I have read almost all of your stories and you just continue churning out these practically perfect pieces. Wether it is a one shot, or a lengthy story, they are amazing down to the grammer and punctuation... Sigh, I envy you and your talent, and although I may never write them, I will continue to enjoy them. This story in particular. You are much to modest, it was wonderful! I love this pairing, and I love your interpretation of the couple, particularly Hermione this time.
    I have notice in others that you always make her seem less then attractive, but interesting? (I'm curious as to what that means anyways?) In this story I feel her beauty is given due credit, granted she is a fictional character and other then the movie I suppose everyone has their own opinion of how she looks. I guess I've just always assumed she'd have a natural beauty about her, and I finally got that from this story that I didn't in the others... does that even make a lick of sense?
    I suppose I'm babbling now and I apoligize. I simply wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story, and look forward to more. Hmmm... that wasn't so hard, I don't see why I couldn't of just said that instead!
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  • From TriniMinx on January 25, 2009
    aww, that's very cute!
    funny spell, lol.
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on January 25, 2009
    I loved this one. Very well written. I loved how his strength to deny her withered away until he couldn't help himself!
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