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Reviews for The Heart\'s Desire

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Gertie on January 25, 2009
    A dozen long-stemmed Slytherins for my favorite fic author ever. This reminds me of your earliest stories. Something about Snape and the way they come together. It was a wonderful early V-Day surprise.
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  • From sassmacfru on January 25, 2009
    I was looking for just such a story, it was funny, lite and hot! I hope that you keep it up and I would like to know what story you have in the works.
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  • From ANON - Lu on January 24, 2009
    Yehhhhhhhh Snapes Goddess returns.... and what a belter. I really enjoyed this, please don't take it down. Lovely and fluffy, just what I needed. Thank you.

    Lu
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  • From ANON - DarkLadyLyra on January 24, 2009
    Hey,

    It's so great to see you posting again. I really liked this story, a new twist so to speak. I do so hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on January 24, 2009
    Aww...please don't take it down! I think this was a great story! Cute, yet sultry! You certainly have a talent for writing creative, never boring stories!
    The only thing I may critique is that Severus' change of heart to finally accept what Hermione was offering seemed a bit rushed. How exactly did he feel jilted before? It wasn't quite clear to me.
    Other than that, great piece of writing! Thank you for all your contributions to fanfiction!
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  • From ANON - doodle on January 24, 2009
    I alway love your work. But I think I have a a new all time favorite line "knee walking drunk but that was just semantics"! That is just priceless. Thanks for sharing your gift.
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  • From gtbioteach on January 24, 2009
    What a funny, light hearted story! I love how you had her popping in on him in all kinds of situations. Your vulnerable Snape is a great character. Loved It!!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 24, 2009
    i LOVED it!!!! i laughed sooo hard when she was like 'oh GODS.... she mouth raped him' ha ha that was great i like that you wrote hermione a little snarky in the beginning... and poor severus i just wanted to give him a hug i am glad that he succumbed to hermione of course he did not have too much of a choice.... fabulous job... ok i am on to read his kiss then probably something in the way she moves again... that was after all the fic that got me started with ya!!!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on January 24, 2009
    I adore it!! It was sweet and a bit funny in the how the hell did this happen sense...but best of all it made me smile!

    I love a happy Sev and Mione!!


    Brilliant work!!

    Love and Hugs!
    Lady B*
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  • From ANON - Kathryne on January 24, 2009
    Love your works as always Goddess, a very nice before sleep bedtime story!
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  • From nastygrl on January 23, 2009
    Oh, beautiful! I love how you write Hermione and Severus. Very sexy, very snarky, and just an irresistable bad boy waiting to be saved.

    Thank you!
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  • From diamondmouse on January 23, 2009
    awww that was really sweet
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 23, 2009
    Well for a quick idea that was great! I like that spell. lol These are the times I wish I was her. ;-) Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - daisyMaeEvans on January 23, 2009
    This is lovely, dear! I'm so glad you put it up here. Thanks so much for sharing!
    Hugs-
    Ds
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  • From carha on January 23, 2009
    I've been looking every day for your next post. I liked this story very much, and it's my favorite pair! Please don't take it down. I am going to be always on the watch for whatever your wonderful mind pops out next!
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