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Reviews for Moving Forward

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From voraciousreader on January 25, 2009
    Severus is a very wise man, and I'm glad to see it. I'd say Hermione's version of the Hammurabic code has produced a far more interesting Lucius and Draco as well. Good chapters, and I can hardly wait for more!
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  • From savigar on January 24, 2009
    Awww, Sev, don't give up so easily!

    Very much enjoying this, so far...
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  • From savigar on January 24, 2009
    Just finished Chapter 3, and I'm really enjoying your take on Hermione. I also find myself hoping for all three of my favorite characters (Lucius, Hermione, and Severus) to find a way to, um, accomodate each other. On to chapter 4...
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  • From savigar on January 24, 2009
    Ooh, I'm liking this. Lucius and Hermione with a delicious serving of Severus, very nice. Going on to chapter 3...
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  • From Ithilwen on January 24, 2009
    Great chapters.. But I feel you are moving a bit fast..
    But anyway, Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2009
    sounds interesting....i'm in....! more please
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on January 23, 2009
    Hooked! Call me fish, and reel me in. More when you can, please.
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  • From margaritama on January 23, 2009
    Hermione is a dirty girl isn't she???? Lucius is so naughty.
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  • From Ithilwen on January 23, 2009
    This does show promise...

    I wonder maybe some of those memories were hers or someone close to her?

    And what did Snape and Draco talk about that ended in tears?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2009
    This is a great story so far xxxx

    Cannot wait ch 3 xxxx
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  • From wishyouwere on January 23, 2009
    I thought that punishing Lucius with living through someone else's torture was inspired! I was also side swiped by the sudden sexual overtones of the relationship between Severus and Hermione. To go a chapter and a half with no inkling that their relationship was even remotley intimate made it that much more of a surprise (the good kind - that is my favourite pairing). Were Hermione and Severus involved while she was still dating Ron?
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  • From chyara on January 23, 2009
    uh oh....

    I love SS/HG stories as well as LM/HG. I hope she doesn't break Sev's heart if this is an LMHG story. Or they could be a 3 some...lol I love those too.

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  • From margaritama on January 23, 2009
    Hmmm - still not sure what Hermione did exactly to Lucius but he's more subdued. She really is a brilliant little witch. And Harry's with Blaise - yummy.
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