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Reviews for Moving Forward

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  • From nonentity on August 06, 2009
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  • From nonentity on August 06, 2009
    "you're bigger than Severus!" *giggle* I like that Harry doesn't realize that Lucius and Hermione are fucking when Harry and Draco accidentally walk in on them.
    Oh, the new assistant being a force to reckon with and making Snape do things that are good for him is also amusing.
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  • From nonentity on August 06, 2009
    The Draco/Harry scene at the beach where Hermione doesn't ID herself is cute. I like Hermione messing with Harry's head slightly.
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  • From nonentity on August 06, 2009
    At the beginning of chapter 4, Hermione is awakened by yelling. I *think* people with hearing issues would normally just hear muffled sounds, but I could be lying. The scene with Ron is a hoot though. Snape being his snarky self to Hermione after the Ron/Hermione showdown is a hoot.
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  • From ANON - lady lae on May 22, 2009
    What the fuck? I literally said that while reading this chapter. Lucius and Hermione must have some special connection to be casually talking about spending ever after together without being anything more than affectionate acquaintances. Did I miss a chapter? This is moving way too fast! I really have loved your story up until this chapter blindsided me. Your characterizations are truly genuine and believable. I like the alternate universe you're building and want to see all of the minor character's issues played out. I like Hermione's vigilante streak (why did she just go after Malfoy?)and her "arrangement" with Severus.
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 20, 2009

    Chapters 7-9: Sweet! Lucius and Hermione had time to themselves. But coming back to Italy to be ambushed by the Weasleys
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 20, 2009

    Chapters 4-6: OMG, Ron is such a self-centered, immature fool. Molly must have lost the ability to parent after she had Bill and Charley. The rest of the Weasley clan got weirder and weirder as the kids went on. Perhaps there was oxygen depletion during her pregnancy
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 20, 2009

    Chapters 1-3: This tale just sucked me in from the first paragraphs. It
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  • From ANON - Mia on February 02, 2009
    Bloody beautiful. I will never be able to get enough of your words. I was like Hermione's oral skills on this one, and took it all in at once. That's why this was the only review from me. But I wanted to tell you that it was brilliant, you are brilliant. I truly enjoyed every little piece of it. It was wonderful. I am assuming that she never revealed to Lucius whose memories he suffered through. Thank you ever so much for sharing your considerable talent with us. I was extremely entertained, and right at a point when I really felt the need to escape from real life for a moment too. It is appreciated.

    ~Mia
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on January 28, 2009
    totally loved it
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  • From ANON - Little B on January 26, 2009
    Ack!! I meant "yummy" not "gummy"! Good grief :)
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  • From voraciousreader on January 26, 2009
    Loved it, and was amazed at how quickly you updated! Now i'm spoiled and waiting for your next one, I guess.
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  • From margaritama on January 26, 2009
    Cute story with some sassy smut.

    I like that it was short too.
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  • From ANON - Little B on January 26, 2009
    I can't help but feel that you ended up with a different story than was originally intended. Lucius' punishment was a great beginning. It seemed like we'd get a very dark and angsty story. I feel like there needed to be a bridge between the punishment and him falling for Hermione.

    Overall, it was an entertaining, although rushed and uneven story. I found the terrible half of the Weasleys to be quite fun. Lucius was, of course, gummy. And, the ending was sweet!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 26, 2009
    This was a great story! I loved how you wrote Hermione. She was strong and knew her mind, yet wasn't so out of character as to shut herself off mentally because of what she went through.

    Tiffany
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