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Reviews for For the Potions Master\'s Amusement

By : SnapeSubmiss
  • From Visitkarte on February 19, 2009
    Mmmmh, this one was niiice!
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  • From Visitkarte on February 16, 2009
    Well this one wasn't fair. He implies that he'd go to the prostitute after her, cheats her of her bet win and makes her feel bad. That's just misuse of power and abuse, both physical and emotional He might have punished her for braking one rule, but he cares nothing about her, only about himself. This is not submission, it's an abusive relationship.

    I hoped he would hear her out, punish her for her mistake, heal her and give her what he wanted. This way, I'm just angry and annoyed.

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  • From Visitkarte on February 13, 2009
    Mmmh... Yummy, a gift with dual use, both of them introduced by the sexiest man in the HP-World... No, not Lucius, silly! He is too spoiled and whiny to be the sexiest man!

    Thanks for the fast update!

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  • From Visitkarte on February 12, 2009
    You evil tease!
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  • From ANON - Umbridgeskitty on February 12, 2009
    An interesting story. I have actually stumbled upon this website and am enjoying myself reading them
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  • From ANON - Vitani on February 12, 2009
    I have a guess on what's in the little box! I hope I'm right! heheh
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  • From ANON - Vitani on February 11, 2009
    I'm really loving this story. It's hard to find good Snape/hermione D/s fiction. You're doing absolutely wonderfully. Please update again soon because I can't wait to see how they figure things out!

    *love*
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  • From CharlotteBlack on February 08, 2009
    I had honestly meant to review this story about three chapters ago but I kept forgetting! What I had wanted to say was firstly that I am SO glad that I looked past the first chapter. I don't know why but I read the first chapter when you had only one or two chapters up and I decided I didn't want to read anymore. I obviously changed my mind when I was extremely bored and looking for something else to read. I think it was the peeing bit that really put me off. I am really glad I kept on reading though because I absolutely am loving the rest of the story. I love it! I really do. The only suggestion I had also wanted to make (about three chapters ago) was that we could get a bit more perspective on what Hermione thinks of Severus' brush off to anything more in their 'relationship' but I think you have answered my plea already with this last chapter (chapter 6).

    I am really glad I came back and read this story properly. I think the peeing-humiliation part of the story is a good idea but perhaps my suggestion would be to indroduce queezy themes like that a little bit farther on in stories rather than right at the start - that way readers that a turned off by that kind of thing would be already hooked on your awesome story that they could look past these things more easily and not be discouraged from reading.

    Of course you are the author with your stories so you can feel free to ignore me completely - I just really hope other readers weren't turned away by the first chapter because I really love where you've taken it so far!

    Also I think Hermione's reaction in this chapter was just perfect :)
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  • From WesleyY7 on February 07, 2009
    Two chapters in a few shorts days?! I'm happy the reviews made you happy enough to write for us.

    Chapter 5 - "She could neither back away from the table, nor could she stand. This was his idea of helping?" I really loved this line because it made me feel that while she was longing and desperate she was beginning to feel a bit more conflicted about what's happening to her. I'm glad she's not 100% this is so wonderful with the situation. And I love how Snape continues to seduce her with his voice. He speaks to her "silkily" and purrs and caresses her with his voice. He seems to know she has a weakness for his praise coupled with a simple "Good girl". Love it! And I loved this: "she dissolved like sugar in his mouth." Beautiful. I also liked how her obsession begins to grow with her seeing his journal and wondering so much about it and that final last line.

    Chapter 6 - This chapter was a bit of a surprise to me as I knew she was becoming a bit obsessed, but falling him to Hogsmeade and wasting away? On the one hand I want to say I can't see Hermione doing this. On the other hand, I can see her as someone who really wants to be accepted. (Just thinking about how upset she was in the first book when she had no friends and a teacher's approval mean so much.) "Hermione wanted to cross the room and slap that shy smile from the other witch
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  • From Visitkarte on February 06, 2009
    This story is so incredibly hot, and I'm jealous!
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  • From ANON - Izzie on February 06, 2009
    Snape's characterization's perfect:) And I love the regular updates!
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  • From ANON - kat on February 04, 2009
    Interesting and intense. I like the way you have controlled the rising tension in the story so far.
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  • From ANON - LB on February 04, 2009
    im a fan!
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  • From ANON - Izzie on February 03, 2009
    I do love your story and partiuclarly Snape's aloofness:)
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  • From ANON - steve on February 02, 2009
    i love this tale, so much better than the usual tales of snape and hermione, no nonsense about making snape handsome, no romantic rubbish
    brilliant
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