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Reviews for For the Potions Master\'s Amusement

By : SnapeSubmiss
  • From kierasama on June 24, 2012
    I would much like to see another chapter or two updated here, as FF.net has been talking of deleting many stories of sexual nature, I've moved all of mine to this site. This is my favorite story, and I would hate to see it deleted. I just thought to let you know.
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  • From ANON - noneya on February 17, 2010
    Great story.

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  • From Visitkarte on March 21, 2009
    What's wrong, dear? I'll gladly continue reading on FFNet...
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  • From ANON - Julie on March 17, 2009
    This story is like an addiction! I keep returning to it in hopes of an update, and, if there are none, I simply reread it from the beginning. It's beautifully done.
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  • From ANON - vebecca on March 14, 2009
    I LOVE this story, thanks for sharing. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - APH on March 11, 2009
    anxiously awaiting the next installment... please post soon!
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  • From ANON - APH on March 02, 2009
    I am thoroughly enjoying this story and checking anxiously for updates. I particularly loved Chapter 14, the way in which their secret world begins to spill over into daily life outside of Snape's office- I adored the scene in the storage closet. And Hermione's understanding in Chapter 15 that the submissive is not entirely powerless. Incredibly sexy writing! More please!

    ** WesleyY7, re Number 14: google Lucid Dream Number 14, I think this is the toy being referred to
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  • From WesleyY7 on February 28, 2009
    Chapters 13 and 14 in such quick succession? What a wonderful treat!

    I find it so interesting that this fic is told completely from Hermione's view thus having influence on your readers' inference of Snape's feelings and actions. Those who like the pair are enjoying the story and hope Snape has feelings for Hermione and will eventually enter into a healthier relationship. While I love the character of Snape, I've never been able to read stories romantic stories with him and Hermione. I always felt he viewed her with distaste and was annoyed by her know-it-all attitude. Yet, I love this story because I'm reading it as him getting off on controlling and humiliating her, even if it's just in his presence. He's taking pleasure in slowly and utterly destroying her. I guess what I'm trying to say, and I hope this makes some sort of sense, is it's a testament to what a wonderful writer you are and how great this story is because you can have readers who have polor opposite views on the pair and have them still enjoy this fic.

    *"Hermione felt herself relax infinitesimally. This was an intellectual discussion. This was well within her comfort zone" That's so Hermione! Comfortable with the brain, confused by the heart at times.

    *Oh crap! Snivelling? And on her knees at his feet, begging? She is in so deep! And he can view all of this with a "dispassionate" disinterest?! And he will still continue to see Tabby (who is she anyway?), just not on the same night. Poor thing.

    *Ah, Hermione and her book. Hmmm...Master Maximus and t? Is t Tabby? And yet again he mentions finding her another Dominant once she graduates. Will he follow through? Ohhh, who would he chose?

    *The final part of this chapter was amazing. He again remains completely clothed while she is naked, both phycially and emotionally. "It is time for you to learn how your breasts can bring pleasure to your Dominant." Merlin, the man continues to turn her (and me) on with his words. And transitioning from calling her a slut to a dirty filty girl to a good girl...he knows which buttons to push!

    *"Nearly three days without an orgasm... It had been very difficult for her." LOL! Aw, poor Hermione! And only she would get completely involved her class assignment and forget about her sex mission.

    *"something in him seemed to break" Ah, so he's not totally unaffected. The darkened closet scene was hot. And he thinks she's "remarkable". Hmmm.

    *So, you mentioned in Chapter 13 that you were behind on answering reviews. I'm assuming this might mean reviews from other sites you've posted at as it doesn't appear you're answering here. Which is totally fine, of course! I was just hoping you, or someone else, could explain Number 14? You mentioned it before and I've seen a few rave about it elsewhere, yet Google isn't a big help.






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  • From ANON - roxie on February 27, 2009
    I am loving this story! If you can get more chapters out this weekend I say yes, please! I hope Severus eventually realizes Hermione's feelings (though maybe he already does) and returns them. These two give me tingly feelings in my, well you know where... LOL!
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  • From ANON - Jen on February 24, 2009
    Just about the hottest fic Ive read in forever. Thanks so much.
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  • From sjrodgers108 on February 23, 2009
    loved it please more updates thanks
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  • From ANON - godblessemohair on February 23, 2009
    I LOVE this story. You're the first D/s story that I've read on this site that actually captured the D/s aspect and not just the BDSM. Its refreshing and I'm loving every chapter that I've read. I can't wait to read more. Absolutely fantastic writing!
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  • From MarieLennox on February 21, 2009
    How can he do this to Hermione and openly date other women? It's just outrageous! I like her posessiveness. And your describtions of their "quiet moments" are great...


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  • From WesleyY7 on February 21, 2009
    A new chapter? What a great thing to see first thing in the morning! :)

    *"His fingertips stroked over her cheek, tucking a hank of bushy hair behind her ear" I think this is the first time in a super long time when someon actually got Hermione's hair right. Way too often Snape would be brushing an "errant curl" behind her ear. I love how you remain faithful to canon descriptions for both of them.

    *"Swallowing her disappointment as well as she could, she sat up, too, sitting like an upright wooden puppet upon his suddenly inhospitable knee." I adore your writing and ths line is a perfect example why. And I love the comparison of her as a puppet. He has complete control over her.

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  • From WesleyY7 on February 21, 2009
    I haven't reviewed in a bit so I hope you don't mind if my comments cover that last four chapters. Your writing is amazing and I can't get over how often you post chapters. I am really enjoying this story.

    *The D/s conversation in chapter 7 was a bit surprising. Obviously from your warnings and previous chapters, I knew this was a theme. However, I didn't expect it to come up in an actual D/s arrangement. I'm not one to ship Snape/Hermione often, so I'm hoping that while they continue their relationship, it won't too fluffy.

    *I really liked how he reassured her that her desires weren't deviant or immoral. The parallel between her sexual feelings and her intelligence was very ineresting.

    *So he is sleeping with Taffy, but not in a D/s capacity. Snape has the best of both worlds with the two girls, doesn't he? :)

    *Again, I love how he continues to seduce her with his voice and his words. He manages to turn her on by calling her a slut one moment, then praising her as a good girl the next.

    *"When at last the spanking ceased, the spanking hand moved seamlessly to fingering pleasure, seeking out and finding her clitoris, and she was almost disappointed as, within seconds, the powerful pulse of her orgasm ripped through her, moving her from crying to sobbing." One single line and I love how it conveys her emotions. From cleansing spanking to powerful oragasm. I love how he helps her let go of everything.

    *Snape controlling her pleasure while in her mind was...wow. And the last half of Chapter 11 was amazing too. Merlin, what filthy erotic words was he whispering in her ear?

    Such an interesting dynamic between the two of them. I like how despite all that has happened, Snape still remains somewhat of an enigma to Hermione. Each time she thinks she has him figured out, he surprises her. She become comfortable and lax, he punishes her. She puts her trust in him and gets mind blowing pleasure. I am loving how this story is progressing.

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