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Reviews for The Third Mate

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  • From wolfcathope on April 23, 2009
    I love this story I say let teh pup live it would be good practice for Harry when he has his and Sirus will want to be the Omega even less after giving birth even though he will love the kid
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  • From Juana13 on April 23, 2009
    no!!! how could this story end so quickly!
    i wish you could write more, but...oh well.
    loved how sirius and remmy both fucked harry. hope to see more sex scenes in the future. and i guess i'll vote for the baby to die.
    ....
    *shakes head* did i just say that? O.o
    i mean, of course i dont want a baby to die, but that'll add drama to this story.
    and at the end you can have someone get pregnant, either harry or sirius, and this time the baby can be born.
    happy ending : )
    but anyways, looking forward to the next chapter. cant wait!!
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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on April 23, 2009
    i want the kid to live!! i think they should get a cure like at the last minute!
    great story either way though! i'm glad that hermione was willing to help and such
    and that harry's plan worked so well
    and OMG that threesome/DPness was just amazing!!
    great chapter
    -Kyle
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  • From lovershatred on April 23, 2009
    please let the baby live . i really tove the story . please write more .
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  • From 4872luk on April 16, 2009
    I like this one. I vote just continue. I know baby dying is sad but it will make the story so good. I'm already starting to imagine the revenges that the trio are going to have. What doesn't break us makes us stronger. I think that the trio need something to truly unite them. Well that is my idea anyway.
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  • From Makovaso on April 16, 2009
    I like option 2. Good story, please update soon.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 16, 2009
    why!!!!!!!!!!!

    another great chapter!
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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on April 16, 2009
    hmm well i kinda like how its going now but i just had an idea.
    maybe they could like try and do an emergency c-section type of thing and keep it in a magic womb or something. but like they all think its going to die, but it doesn't. and then sirius could have problems with it not being harry's child and harry wants it to be his...idk
    its another idea
    i find this chapter interesting though
    can't wait to see what you do
    -Kyle
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on April 16, 2009
    I couldn't see Sirius giving birth anyway, so I think the child dieing is good, well not good, a child dieing is never good, but for this plot line it is (I don't mean to offend anyone with that statement). I don't think Sirius has fully taken in that there are 3 in this relationship if his statement *But its not his kid* is how he looks on the three of them having children *sighs* he really needs to understand that there are 3 in this relationship now not just him and Remus.
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  • From aeferch on April 06, 2009
    Option 2 sounds better to me! Less drama over beta omega roles and all.....
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 06, 2009
    Oh, yeah!

    SO LOVING IT!
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 06, 2009
    I am not sure, but can you do a combo of the two and have all the steamy sex scenes.
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  • From LadyArtemis112 on April 06, 2009
    Luv the story! I vote for option 2. I am a very big fan of harry being the bottom, in this case, the VERY bottom. Of course this is your story and you should write about whatever you want! anyway, great story!
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  • From artemyl on April 06, 2009
    I vote for the child dies. Also, great story so far; hope to see an update soon~!
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  • From HPFAN88 on April 06, 2009
    I think option two would be better.
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