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Reviews for The Third Mate

By : knj4k4
  • From Calmzone1 on May 25, 2014
    good story - I was wondering if you ever did the other version - I think both would be good
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on December 29, 2010
    This was an awesome story. I never expected that ending. I am glad I read it.
    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on August 06, 2009
    yay!!!!!!!!!!!!! you let her live!!!!!!!!

    loved it and i can't wait to read temper's story.
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  • From Kip on August 04, 2009
    This is a really compelling story - but, and there is a 'but', it deserves better than the errors you have left in it before posting. Grimmwald place? Askaban? Bealtrix Lestrange? Come on! Spelling errors are one thing, but to get key details wrong like that is sloppy. You obviously intended writing this for other Potter fans, so grant us the courtesy of using the correct names. That said, your idea is very original, and you've nicely established the interaction between the characters (despite the departure from canon). The grammar is fine, but you really do need to use the spellcheck to pick up your typo's.

    When I stumbled across this fic you already had six chapters posted, and I haven't had a chance to see any other reviews yet before putting mine up - I do hope you will understand that I'm not attacking your imagination or your intention, but if you are going to achieve the potential that is plainly in you, positive criticism is essential. Great writers don't just happen, like anything else it only gets better with practice, but how would any of us learn if no one tells us where we're going wrong?

    Best wishes, and now I only have to wait eagerly for the next chapter.

    Oh - and p.s. for what it's worth - I vote Life too...

    'Purr

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  • From Wilder on July 16, 2009
    Let it live!!! Or make harry pregnant now after that fabulous romp. I also thought, what if they transported the baby to another body that HAD an active womb... Like harry. Thus everyone is happy. Harry gets to be the Omega, they get a family and the baby lives... Awesome story
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  • From pagetaylor on May 04, 2009
    Save it please!!! Its just too cruel otherwise! I know life is cruel, but this is fanfiction!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2009
    OH wow I love this story!!! I vote for the child to die, I think the story will be better that way, the proposed story line for that sounds better than the other one. This is so hot, I totally love it! I really like the scenes where Moony's werewolf nature comes out and things get rough... so hot!
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  • From nedra19 on April 29, 2009
    hello I love your fic. I really love if the child live and I suggest Harry to be pregnant. it's hot. thank you. bye see you soon
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  • From MiraxSlytherin on April 27, 2009
    Save the baby please don't put Harry though that.
    Keep up with the updates I like this story.
    Mira
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  • From lostinthought on April 27, 2009
    why not. have the kid live and in the process well he did just take two on... don't see why we cant have more on the way lol. thanks for sharing cant wait to see what comes next.
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  • From SakuraMaxwellMinamino on April 24, 2009
    Oh Please the baby HAS to live it would kill me to see it die. I know the feeling in a way of losing a child not even born yet and it is more heartwrenching than most would believe especially when the child hasnt even been born yet and is still developing and I don't mean miscarriage in the normal sense. it is very heartwrenching and to this day my child is still mourned and for Harry and Remus and Sirius to lose their abay would be heartwrenching. Please allow the baby to live it would be such a happy moment.
    Ja matte ne
    Sakura Chang
    Eternity
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  • From AnythingBut on April 24, 2009
    Had me melting!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2009
    you should save the kid and maybe have some kind of weird magical twin thing go on so that he has a kid by harry too at the same time
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  • From on April 23, 2009
    LIVE!!!! The child shall live and grow to reshape the wizarding world!!! *cackles insanely*
    Seriously *wink* I vote life!

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  • From angelnomiko on April 23, 2009
    wow .. that was hot .. please save the baby.. please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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