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Reviews for The Path of Betrayal

By : retalia
  • From pstibbons on April 29, 2009
    Good start, excellent premise for a story.

    Would be nice if the chapters were longer. And if there was a beta.

    You might want to post this on ffnet as well.

    Romance... well, you could do that. Presumably not with Harry or Ron. Hermione seems too damaged to emotionally trust anyone again.

    The bit about Ginny being unfaithful was a nice touch - though if Harry thought that it was a low blow, he's pretty delusional.
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  • From Sampdoria on January 30, 2009
    I really like to read a story where Hermione don't take crap from her two suposed friends, I love Ginny and Ron bashing so that is rigth up my alley too:-). I have a suspision though that Harry regrets his actions and that Hermione will forgive him at some point during the story, and I am not sure I like that. Don't misunderstand, I wold love for Harry to have regrets, painfully so, I just don't think he should be forgiven any time soon, and if he is, he should have to work hard for it and never become the same friend again, his betrayal was too big!
    Not sure I like the idea that Hermione who has done better than both Harry and Ron as an auror suddenly should answear to Harry, Kingsley migth think that the boy-saviour is just what he needs, in stead of finding the best there is (read Hermione), but I am not sure she should have to take order from someone so much stupider than her...
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