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Reviews for The Dating Game

By : saritat9
  • From MotekElm on April 02, 2017

    I would have really loved this story if it didn't perpetuate and focus on virginity myths.

    1) the myth that the hymen is a solid barrier that breaks (it isn't) and that's what constitutes virginity (it doesn't). As a physician, I feel the need to point out the hymen is a flexible ring of tissue that has nothing to do with virginity

    2) the Madonna / whore dycotomy in a wife.

    Yuck on those


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  • From Trelweny on July 30, 2012
    Charlie Whitmore is officially on my list of favorite OoCs. He was an absolute delight!

    Wonderful story. Couldn't stop reading it. Did have a few sections where I couldn't keep up with or figure out who was saying what line (predominantly a conversation with Ron, Harry, and Ginny) but otherwise very well paced.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From LydiaLydia on November 26, 2011
    So fluffy, so sexy, so witty! You really rock at writing dialogues, I laughed many times while reading your lovely story. I almost didn't read it at all, the title making me fear something too OOC and too far from the good old Dramione. I'm glad I gave it a try anyway! And it's not so AU, Herm. even still wears her Hogwarts skirt ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2009
    All done and that was just too delish for words but I'll find some anyway. I loved the whole 'game' of it all, how they kept going around in circles not realising how the other felt about them until Charlie clued them in and pushed them together. And I must say, Draco did a lovely job of properly de-flowering her. Hmmm, I think I'd like to meet this Charlie of yours too. ;) What a character he was. LOl Well done, brilliant,fun read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2009
    Okay so I'm only into chpater two but this is too much fun to wait until I've read everything. I'm loving it. I love that Draco and Hermione became friends first and act like girlfriends or guyfriends and have someone to talk to without realising their sexual chemistry only needed a kickstart to get things going and after Hermione's date with Charlie (oh I bet Draco's kicking himself now) Draco got less of a push and more of a shove. I'm curious to know why Hermione really agreed to such a thing. LMAO I have to get back to reading so I know what happens next. :)
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  • From RavenTiger on February 07, 2009
    -Cheers- This was a good ending to a good story. I'm glad I wasn't the only one who saw Charlie as gay/bi. If you were to write a Charlie/Neville slash fic I would totally read it. Just a suggestion ;]. Peace.
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  • From margaritama on February 07, 2009
    My fave line: He'd take it slow...ish! ROFL! Dear goodness, that Draco can make your knickers wet by just looking at you! This was so fun, the story was refreshing, witty and down right enjoyable. Thank you.
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  • From caseyjarryn on February 06, 2009
    haha, I just read through all 15 chapters at once :o)
    Great Fic!! I'll have to read your other stuff as well, although Im not really a fan of harry smut, but Ill give it a go!!
    xoxo
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  • From margaritama on February 06, 2009
    HOLY CRAP - I love dirty talking Draco....so HOT. "Take me take me....she says waving her knickers about!" LOL

    No really, I love the innocence mixed with dirty lust.
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  • From on February 06, 2009
    Oh my! Where can I get a Draco like that for myself? Yum!
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  • From dragongirl on February 06, 2009
    Beautiful!!!! Hot, Sexy and Tastefull..
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  • From margaritama on February 06, 2009
    "After making love. And sometime after making love, I will teach you how to fuck. I love both, as much as I love you."

    Romance and raunchiness mixed in one sentence! Only you could do that. I love it.
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  • From on February 06, 2009
    Wow! Draco finally got it together! I adore this story!
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  • From dragongirl on February 06, 2009
    This is soo cool and it went so fast.... Please keep writing other fanfics maybe a triad with this two and Harry or Blaise. Those could be fun.

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  • From margaritama on February 05, 2009
    I'm just laughing right now...I don't even know what to say. That was quite a twist on the traditional "talk". LOL
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