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Reviews for Broken Normalcy

By : Flamesky
  • From Dezra on February 01, 2009
    Draco is not making much sense to me.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 01, 2009
    Why do I have the sneaking suspicion that there isn't a real "Egan"? That Draco just made him up just to not to lose face in the supermarket? That would be a cool twist *hint hint*
    Another cool twist would be that the paintings are Draco's and the paintings that Draco didn't want Harry to see are really portraits of Harry, thus evidence of Draco's enduring love for Harry. Can't you see that I'm a bloody romantic? lol (I also read way too much fanfic for it to be healthy!)
    Keep going! This is a really intriguing story!
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  • From RRW on February 01, 2009
    Oh this is one of the best stories I have read in a while. I have a feeling that Egan has left the building. But more than that, I wonder what Ginny is "sorry" for?
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  • From tiggator on February 01, 2009
    Ooh I have some thoughts, but I will keep them to myself for the time being. :) But I will say that they are most definitely about Ginny... And if I'm right, GRRRR!!! I can't wait for more!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 01, 2009
    i loved it!
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  • From selfproclaimedbeauty05 on January 31, 2009
    Wow, I really like your story line. Your plot is very good. I love the details of Harry's emotions. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - L_c on January 31, 2009
    Im loving the story idea.
    Only thing with it, i sometimes lose track of the conversation, who's saying what. In some instances I think you have had seperate lines for each speaker, then you'll put both speakers on one line then back to seperate...if that makes sense. it just gets a little confusing at times

    Fab concept though :) & Ill def keep reading :)
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  • From blackpaddy on January 31, 2009
    Well that last chapter was a little bit confusing what with the sudden jump back to memory form but other than that I'm absolutely loving this story so far! The tension, the confusion, the banter! Brilliant and oh-so-in-character! Looking forward to more,
    Stef
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  • From tiggator on January 31, 2009
    Wow. Good start so far. It was sad at the end, when Harry was crying. Too many emotions flying around for him. I hope he can make it. :)
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  • From Dezra on January 31, 2009
    I need to know why they parted.
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