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Reviews for Broken Normalcy

By : Flamesky
  • From snnj11220 on April 04, 2009
    Wow, this just keeps on getting better and better.

    I was aware that Draco was Egan, but I never thought that things ran that deep. I am so upset over what they did to Harry and Draco, but mostly Harry. I hope he doesn't take them back as friends and doesn't forgive them. I hate when people have them commit grave wrongs to Harry and all of a sudden they are buddy buddy again. As if they never hurt him.

    And then you have the kids to think about.

    Lots of stuff going on here, I am loving the story so far!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 26, 2009
    Holy smoke! I soooo need chapter 7!!! What will they say? What will Harry do? Sooooo need more!
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  • From ANON - kissimi on February 17, 2009
    i love this sory please update sooooooonnn i need to know whats going to happen
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  • From adriennemalfoy on February 07, 2009
    omg i love this story! please please hurry with the update :)
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  • From gentlenightrain on February 07, 2009
    I would be very willing to beta this fic because, quite frankly, it needs it. I LOVE the story but the grammatical errors are killing me. *heart heart*
    I'm nice and friendly, but very honest and thorough when it comes to editing. :)
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  • From tiggator on February 07, 2009
    haha Okay, so I just read Chapter 4 again, and now it makes more sense. I had remembered first reading that chapter and wondering "fresher in his mind?" knowing it had some sort of hidden meaning, but it just sort of slipped my mind. haha You're good!
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  • From tiggator on February 07, 2009
    Well, I must say. As much as I KNEW those children weren't his and I was very angry with Ginny, I can't be all that upset with her anymore. Wow, I didn't even think about them being Draco's. I just figured he had known she cheated. Ahh! But how can I fault her for that, when they were just seeking comfort? It's Ron and Hermione who I just can't believe!!! So, no more "Grr" for Ginny, although I still think she should have told him. But now it's Grr to the others. Poor Harry. You were definitely right about more emotions coming out. Can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - murderaid on February 07, 2009
    wow, you just keep surprising me :o and i would of just assumed they were all goody-too-shoes or something. but this is shocking. poor harry wound up between all these lies.
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  • From RRW on February 05, 2009
    I knew that there was more to Ginny's apology earlier. Oh this is getting good!
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  • From tiggator on February 05, 2009
    Absolutely amazing ending. I loved how Harry was afraid he had forgotten how to kiss him. It was beautifully handled and I applaud you! Draco is definitely his missing piece. Okay, so I have to admit that I didn't see the Egan thing coming. I just assumed it was real. But the part about the paintings: my thoughts were definitely on Draco painting them (and the ones he hid were probably pics of Harry). More things are unraveling now. What exactly did they say to keep those two apart? Cannot wait for my questions to be answered by more of your chapters. Wonderful again.
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  • From ANON - murderaid on February 05, 2009
    sorry about the typo above . oops.
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  • From ANON - murderaid on February 05, 2009
    i just started reading this today, and i'm so gripped by this story. i love your wrighting style and i really feel for each charcter, even Ginny who i dislike, you manage to make her even likeable. i would of never thought Egan was a fake haha, i assumed he was just some guy to keep Draco occupied. The misletoe bit is a squee moment. i really cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kitty on February 05, 2009
    oh please update it soon! And I just sooo hope Harry will be with Draco...
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  • From Dezra on February 03, 2009
    I am feel so bad for Harry, but I still wish that I understood what was going on with Draco.
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  • From blackpaddy on February 01, 2009
    Haha that's Ok! Happy to review! I know how much I like it when people review my stories so... yeah! =D And I can feel what they feel because you probably can... *shrugs* I read it somewhere that if the writer doesn't feel it, the reader doesn't either...
    Yep I'm still following the story through! Still loving it too! Just a few grammatical errors in this one but nothing too major really...
    Looking forward to more soon as always!
    Stef =)
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