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Reviews for My Best Enemy's Baby

By : caseyjarryn
  • From MysticWitchRini on July 17, 2009
    hey there im only about half way through your story but i am curious about something i noticed that in the beginning Hermione seemed to be much more close to Draco now she doesnt want anything to do with him (i may be imagining things though i dont know) also what happened to Draco liking Hermione he shoved her away when they were sleeping in the same bed but otherwise very good i like this very much
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  • From ANON - eLiz on July 02, 2009
    Heeey! I've read all of it so far! I just wanted you to know that I love it. The plot is very good. The only thing in the story line that bothered me was when Ron was badmouthing Hermione, no one was stopping him really. Not even Harry got mad at him! But maybe the point was that Ron was sort of being the spokes person for the family, like no one else wanted to say it but they agreed. Well, I love how responsible Draco is being as a father-to-be. I only hope I can find a guy as wonderful as he is when I decide to have a baby.
    I hope you can find your notebook soon! lol I screamed when I read that then noticed there wasn't a chapter after this one--that means you're still looking for it! Hurry!
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  • From kazfeist on June 24, 2009
    I loved the nineteenth chapter. I particularly liked the flowers and the language you have for them. Hopefully, Lucius can change his opinions soon. :D
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  • From ANON - RazorbladeKisses on June 19, 2009
    AHHHH!!! I want to know what happens. PLease update soon and if you could email me when you update I would love it. the email is richelleinsc@yahoo.com
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  • From gigglefaries101 on June 15, 2009
    hi i recently found this and have been eagerly awaiting ch 19 its doing so good i hope you find your note book soon
    dracos choices of names are fabulous and soo funny
    just wonderd though are hermione and draco an item , together , just seeing to pregnancie hormones or just haveing some good hot nookie ??

    keep up the awsome writing loving it

    xoxo
    bekkah (sgfaries@yahoo.com)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2009
    Well I no longer have to find the heater, after reading that I'm very warmed up now. LOL Very sexy - thank goodness there are people who are aware that just because you're pregnant, it doesn't mean you don't have other needs too.

    Feeling very sorry for Narcissa, it must be so very hard for her, not sure what will happen there, haven't figured out what you're going to do here at all. LOL And as for the dinner party, I have my fingers crossed that everything runs smoothly but I can't wait to see how it all goes. :)
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  • From margaritama on June 14, 2009
    all righty - damn that beginning was hot, rushed, desperate, sexy and rough. I liked it. I thought it really displayed Draco's need for her....he is falling for her hard and he's comfortable with expressing his sexuality now.

    Narcissa is breaking my heart....I see no redemtion for Lucius the ass. Nonetheless, I feel for her.

    Can't wait for the dinner party.
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  • From dragongirl on June 14, 2009
    I can asure you we will be waiting...
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2009
    I'm glad Narcissa has strengthened her resolve against Lucius - he's done something that no amount of flowers will undo - personally I think it's a trick because he's worried that she really is going to take him to the cleaners with the divorce but who knows, you might change my mind completely. :) And I'm still so impressed about how adult both Hermione and Draco are being over the situation. Rushing into a marriage is not going to solve any problems. I'm really feeling for Hermione over this dinner party too. I'm not sure how Blaise and Pansy are going to act and with Harry and Ron there too, well it will go amazingly well or be a total disaster and I love that I can't figure out exactly what you're going to do next. And yes, how dare you leave us hanging over 'dessert'. LMAO
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2009
    Yay, you got time out to write!!! :) SO many awwww moments and I love their confessions about not being ready to be parents but going ahead with what life has dealt them anyway - very grown up and mature of them. Damn Narcissa for interupting their making up moment. LOL But oh, what a twist regarding the flowers. I wonder if he really does love and miss her or whether it's just a ploy on Lucius' behalf??? Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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  • From kazfeist on May 31, 2009
    I loved the bouquet at the end....make sure to include the flowers' meanings in the next chapter. Also, kudos on Draco's feelings. Most 17-year-olds wouldn't want parenthood at that age. Even if they're filthy rich pure-bloods. Thanks for making him realistic. Can't wait for the next update! :D
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  • From dragongirl on May 31, 2009
    More smut, and to mold it up humor and drama. Love the humor on Lucius account of course. That would make it memorable.
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  • From LadyWinterhartZC on April 18, 2009
    Awww, that's beautiful! I love this story, so please update soon!
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on April 14, 2009
    I love this fic!

    Your grammar and spelling is pretty goood but this chapter seemed a bit rushed. I don't think it detracted from the story line much but maybe if you paragraphed a bit more and had each sentence of dialogue in a seperate line it would come across a bit more smoothly? I dunno it's your fic and is up to you but you did ask for an assessment so I've chucked in my two knuts...lol

    Great work and leep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2009
    Yay for Easter break and time to update your story. LOL Happy Easter to you, too. :)

    Ah to imagine Draco's face at the thought of Harry or Ron picking his child's name - especially if it turned out to be one he liked. I'm surprised Narcissa hasn't suggested a star one since that's what they're named after, constellations and the like. :)

    Aw how cool to have a holographic image of your baby like that. 4D images are cool, but not that cool.

    Oh Draco, you have to make it clear to your friends how you feel about Hermione and the baby. Hermione did it for you, you great dolt!! Oh what are Blaise and Pansy going to think when they get that note inviting them to think of baby names?????? Clearly they don't believe what Draco told them the second time around.

    Aww, the baby kicked! That's so beautiful, what a lovely way to get them talking to eachother again. :) Loved it!!!! :)


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