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Reviews for My Best Enemy's Baby

By : caseyjarryn
  • From lemonade8 on February 19, 2009
    rotflmao! Cedric!

    I don't know about Narcissa... she IS a slytherin. And it seems like she might already know what Lucius did. But Draco seems to trust her enough to let her know that Hermione is still pregnant and let her know where they live. He must trust her not to tell him. Risky business. Getting a bad feeling about it. Yikes! I'm afraid Lucius will go after her again. A pretty scary possibility.
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  • From chenzo412 on February 19, 2009
    I love this story i really do. However, I thought it was a little ridic that you brought "twilight" into it.

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  • From dragongirl on February 19, 2009
    Beautiful, I cann't wait for Narcissa to kick Lucius Malfoy butt.... That will be lovely and extremely funny..... keep them coming still watching reading and reviewing...
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  • From marieriddle20 on February 19, 2009
    good chap...cant wait for more
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  • From dragongirl on February 14, 2009
    Poor Ron he always put his foot on his mouth lol.... Don't be a stranger .... Keep them coming..
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  • From lemonade8 on February 14, 2009
    You know, the premise is good, the dynamics between Hermione and Draco are very believable in my opinion (ust is believable, attraction is great, situation would actually work irl). Lucius Malfoy, although more tolerant of Hermione's situation than would probably be in canon, is very sinister and his actions were ruthless and cold blooded. I totally buy that he would curse Hermione, especially with his political leanings. I keep coming back to this story wondering what you'll do with it.

    Everything meshes, imo, except I'm having trouble wrapping my mind around Hermione being independently wealthy and living with the Weasley's-- especially after what Ron had done to her. What is the reason? There might be a good one, but I keep getting distracted by the fact that she's living as a burden on Arthur and Molly (Harry is, too...) when she could get a place with Harry or on her own. I would think that Ron's situation would be awkward, and she's inviting guests into someone else's house and it's causing problems and she doesn't seem to mind. It just seems so inconsiderate to punch out Ron at his mother and father's breakfast table. Are she and Harry helping pay the morgage or something? Just trying to figure it out.
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  • From marieriddle20 on February 14, 2009
    loved it....happy v-day
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  • From marieriddle20 on February 13, 2009
    that was amaing....i feel so bad for them...rons an ass
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  • From LadyWinterhartZC on February 12, 2009
    Aww, thats so sweet. They are adorable together. Of course, I still want Lucius to burn for this. Please?
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  • From gabby1234 on February 11, 2009
    If only J.K Rowling could have seen it that way, I certainly agree about Draco and Hermione they really are my favorite couple I treat them as solid and sure as I do Harry and Ginny. I liked all the connections weaved through the chapters like George and Fred and how they felt about the situation and I think you did a really good job with ron!
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  • From gabby1234 on February 11, 2009
    whew that's quite a bite to take in and certainly very sad! I'm curious to see if Lucius will go to askaban.
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  • From on February 11, 2009
    I love this! Poor Hermione & evil Ron!!! Great story!
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on February 11, 2009
    My computer is down so I couldn't review the last chapter, but I love the way your going with this story even thou they had to lose the little boy that he wanted, but all in all it seem to me that its only going to make them closer. Keep it up.
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  • From kazfeist on February 11, 2009
    Interesting story, so far. Keep updating! :D
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  • From Citten on February 11, 2009
    okay i love this story!!!! i totally love that you have not made them like instantly falling in love with each other! i could totally kill lucius and i am a very sweet and gentle person! (side note he is going to totally hate himself later i just know it ,and he should too.) the good old weasleys! EXCEPT RON! can we just dig a hole for him now? i do like the way you have portrated the malfoy family so far too. i really love how you had draco acting in the hospital he is starting to truelly care and they are going to be great together! :) i do hope that another chapter is coming soon! i will do my best to review after each time i read! :)
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