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Reviews for My Best Enemy's Baby

By : caseyjarryn
  • From rebroars on February 11, 2009
    Ah! I was torn when I read about Hermione losing her baby boy. I do love that they're having a girl and that Draco is staying by her side though. I hope the boys or somebody comes up with a good solution of giving Lucius what he deserves. I say hex his hair off then move on to more nefarious acts. Oh Ron, when is he going to learn to keep his mouth shut? Git. I can't wait for following chapters!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on February 10, 2009
    Well at least you have a reason. I just found it strange how it seems that just by chance (or probably not) every single one seems to have chosen to get rid of the boy. I would have loved to see a little boy too, something about them is just so sweet. Haven't been too fond of girls, or I should say the average girl, since one of my classmates (in elementary school, long time I know) decided to pull the 'I'm so cute and sweet. And made of sugar and spice and stuff' and convinced a teacher to punish me when I got upset that she ripped up my classwork and screamed at her. Anyways, overly long story short, I would have loved to see a little boy as well. Oh well, Hermione doesn't seem like the treat my daughter like a living doll type so her kid should be cool.

    It's nice of Harry to try to let go of old animosity for Hermione's sake. Too bad Ron can't grow up and do the same. I hope one of them walloped him good for that stupid comment.
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on February 10, 2009
    =[ poor Hermione and Draco

    and ron! grrr that evil git.

    i loved the ending of the chapter =] the awkwardness lol awww

    Please update soon
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  • From wendymalfoy on February 10, 2009
    I need another chapter!!
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  • From dragongirl on February 10, 2009
    Please be Narcissa who kick Lucius butt!!!! This was simply lovely...
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  • From macropixi on February 10, 2009
    Nooooo you can't let Lucius get away with that! And the Weasleys better be giving that Prat Ron a come-uppance!
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  • From RyGirl824 on February 10, 2009
    Ron is a pig... Never liked that rat-bastard.......

    TOTALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER THOUGH! OHMYGOD!! It was so sweet the way Draco is taking care of Hermione; Sticking up for her, comforting her, and being all snuggly cute with her. I loved what Mione told Draco, about him being better than Ron. She's sooo right. :) Yay. Can't wait for more. Thanks for being so fast updating, too!
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  • From Sampdoria on February 10, 2009
    Lucius should go to Azkaban, no doubt about it, and if you could make it illegal to be plain stupid, Ron could share his cell and they could spend their time ranting on how it is a grand idea to kill children in their mothers womb.
    No matter what happens next with the Malfoy family, nothing can change the fact that Lucius killed his grandson, and everytime he and/or Narcissa (if they ever does)get to see Dracos daugther, the knowlegde of her brothers murder will always be there.
    There is no room for forgiveness for Lucius action, absolutely none! Neither can Ron blame all his stupidity on immaturity and jelousy, he made his bed, he has now proven what a lousy friend he is, and even worse human being for saying that the murder of a child was a grand idea. (I am aboslutely not making this into a debate pro/agains abortion, my oppinion is that only Hermione and Draco had the rigth to make any decissions, and Lucius did kill a much wanted baby!)
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  • From Bookworm51485 on February 10, 2009
    Well, you've succeeded where most have failed and actually got me interested in and reading a het story. I haven't read too many of those in the HP Fandom, or in any fandom really. Still have no real interest in the genre or the pairing, but something about you're story and how you've written the two together appeals to me.

    I do have one question though, why does everybody always kill the little boy. I can not tell you how many almost twin stories I've read where there was one girl and one boy, and in every one they kill the boy. Is there some kind of subconscious hatred towards the male species going on that I don't know about? Because in every story, across fandoms... I just find it to be the strangest thing. Does nobody want a little boy to survive?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2009
    Yep, hate Lucius as much this time as when I first read it. Oh he's so going to pay. I hope you put him somewhere where he's forced to watch his granddaughter grow up in a loving, caring environment while he's left there to rot.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 09, 2009
    That was much better the second time (yes, I was reading it ffnet but thought I would go over it again. :-)) with me added to it, to fix things properly. lol Can't wait for more of the story. Thank you hon!
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  • From macropixi on February 09, 2009
    please tell me that there will be legal repercussions to Lucius!
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  • From on February 09, 2009
    I'm really loving this story. I've just read all 8 chapter in one go and I can't wait for the next update. Damn Lucius for making her lose one of the babies.
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  • From RyGirl824 on February 09, 2009
    Well, I have to admit, I liked the bit where HarryGinny4eva pummelled Lucius to goo. XD

    This chapter had me crying. :( Poor Mione and Draco. I'm glad that they will still have one baby, but I'm so sad that they had to lose their little boy. Damn that Lucius. You should seriously consider penning the worst imaginable death scene..EVER.. for him. Make him suffer!
    LOL. Bloodthirsty a bit, I am.
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ancheto on February 09, 2009
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'm still reeling from the shock of Lucius throwing a curse, and now you drop another bomb with twins?!?! Gosh you're good! I did not see that coming at all.
    This is a great story, more please =)
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