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Reviews for Cloudy Skies and Heartache

By : wildstarchild
  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    Hum, It's too easy to consider that as a rape!
    Sirius can be so stupid!
    Good chapter! I look forward for the next one!
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  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    Ok a girl!! ^^
    I also like her name!
    Now I wonder if you will change their fate (I mean no betrayal, jail and ultimately death)... I hope so.

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  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    Please! May it be a boy!! BOY BOY BOY!
    Im also excited! lol
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  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    It's really original! I read so many fics about Remus and Sirius and never did I read a story which has Remus and Sirius's baby. ;)
    Do you write in Fanfiction as well?
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  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    Lol! Well I really did'nt expect that!
    Nice!^^
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  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    Yessss!! I absolutely loves Sirius's reaction! ^^
    Poor Remus! Id like to hug him to consloe him...
    I'm must be a bit masochist because I enjoy when something very bad happens to my favorites characters...
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  • From tristania on July 09, 2009
    Very nice lemon! I love your descriptions!
    I guess Sirius will react badly the day after...
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  • From starstruck86 on July 08, 2009
    Oooooh. I hope Sirius listens to the inner voice and looks for Remus. He doesn't even know he made a daughter.

    I look forward to the next update!
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  • From sonykit on June 28, 2009
    that was just bittersweet. while i admire remus' love and determination for his daughter, i cannot help but be saddened by how miserable he is because of sirius. i admire how he lacks the bitterness and wants adara to love sirius. however, this brings the problematic predicament of how sirius will react when he learns of her. while i was slightly afraid remus was gonna self-destruct from constantly berating himself over what happened, i'm not anymore because of how obvious he loves his daughter and how much he's willing to try for her sake.
    question though, where is sirius now? i feel he has been missing too long from the fic. hope to see him real soon. hopefully before adara grows up.
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  • From sonykit on June 08, 2009
    liked the lessening of angsty emotions and the blossoming of hope and love again. the urgency of the situation as well as remus's will to be strong for the baby was a good combination. noticed and appreciated the way you are paying more attention to details - this is very important. while your plot alone can be very good, the actual writing style could diminish its impact to the reader. i like your story and i'm looking forward to reading more.
    PS. enjoy your vacation!
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  • From sonykit on June 08, 2009
    this was angst-ridden. i appreciated the fact that you took more effort this time to present remus outside the box of the marauders. it adds to the realism of his character as well as makes the reader more empathetic with his status. his being a werewolf is something many authors take for granted as just being part of his character but you actually took the time to describe the implications to his being. remus talking to his child was just bittersweet. and i'm glad he at least has madame pomfrey, who's such a kind soul.
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  • From sonykit on June 08, 2009
    this chapter was just plain sad. however, i appreciated the fact that you took some effort in delving into remus's life outside of his friends, especially his societal life as a werewolf. moreover, i liked that you still integrated the james and lily into the story and how they wanted to patch things up. sirius is being such a jerk. i liked remus's borderline!martyr personality if only for the fact that your characterization of him is so consistent. pregnancy is so going to complicate things further.
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  • From sonykit on June 08, 2009
    that was one rude wake-up call as well as one hell of a morning-after scene. sirius was so successful in being such a selfish bastard that i wanted to strangle him. remus not defending himself felt, as i said in my previous review, as if he knew something harsh was going to happen. resigned is a word i would use, in addition to crushed and desolate.
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  • From sonykit on June 08, 2009
    this has got to be one of the saddest smut scenes i have ever read. the desperation, anxiety and hopelessness that surrounded their love (or not so loving) scene was bittersweet. i liked the notion of remus giving in to his weakness and how it was played out. at the end, i got this strange feeling that while remus may have had his fill of his fantasy, it was also like he was accepting a grave fate.
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  • From sonykit on June 08, 2009
    remus is so adorable and so in character. his in-the-head commentaries were very amusing as well as informative. it sheds a lot of light on the state of his and sirius's relationship. liked the twist about sirius's different reaction to the recent breakup - it kinda sets a mood for the next parts, which i am now going to read.
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