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By : Scorpio71
  • From Yamizenchou on February 15, 2009
    Nicely done. I noticed Harry seems to be slightly Bi-curious, well whatever. It's not like you're having him suddenly fall in love with Voldemort and Snape. I wonder if Harry will realize the true usefullness of parseltongue? After all, in order to actually his like a snake, one has to make their tongue vibrate at a certain frequency and I'm sure there's many a witch who'd appreciate such effects.
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  • From smhalcyon on February 12, 2009
    I love the story so far. It is by far one of the best written stories grammatically on the site that I have read. I also thoroughly enjoy the story and can't wait until you post more to see where it goes.
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  • From DarQuing on February 09, 2009
    *lol* Really, Draco? You deny you're a poufter, but not that your father bribed his way out of Azkaban? :P

    Good story so far, keep it up! :)
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  • From hawkswench on February 09, 2009
    I loved this chapter!!! Especially Ron's convo with Draco LOL
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  • From alleycat88 on February 09, 2009
    By the way, I really like how this story isn't just smut. You have also given it some depth and a plot is always good ^.^ Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what will happen now and who he will eventually end up with..Although I'm leaning towards Katie here >.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 09, 2009
    Hahahaha that last chapter was awesome! More please!
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  • From juanjoseso on February 08, 2009
    man this web site rules unlike those idiots in ff.net who has those stupid rules of this kind of stuff in stories I'm glad their some web sites that has no rules and allow since those idiots won't allow
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  • From SalonKitty on February 08, 2009
    Oh, and why the change in the outcome of the Second Task? When did Katie become the thing he'd "sorely miss"? When did Dumbledore ever believe the Daily Prophet?
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  • From SalonKitty on February 08, 2009
    Aww, and it started so well.

    I'm not nearly as interested in Harry's PR campaign as a subplot. Be careful that you don't try and fix everything that's wrong in Harry's life. And just where did the idea of polygamy come from? Harry's a 14-year old boy sexually (and magically) experimenting with some flirtatious witches on his Quidditch team. When did it get serious? I can't believe that a young man in his position would be having these thoughts on a committed relationship with multiple partners already when he hasn't even had his first girlfriend. Fooling around and having fun, sure. I hope this won't become a Harry-Has-3-Girlfriends story. I have an easier time buying him being inquisitive and eager enough to work his way through a significant amount of the female population of Hogwarts while improving his "services", than becoming romantically involved with a group of them.

    I loved that you gave Harry some bi-curiosity, but cleared up his sexuality without being discriminative. I particularly like your analogy of the candle and the sun.

    Get back to the smut!
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  • From tallica343 on February 08, 2009
    Awesome story.
    Very realistic compared to most of the other stories like this.
    I also love how you have him taking care of his reputation in a way that actually makes sense.
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  • From kraytkiller on February 08, 2009
    This is great, a story with a plot that actuallky keeps me interested enough to read all of it. Also you seem to write fast, which is always a bonus. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on February 08, 2009
    I'm glad you have a bit of a plot to the story rather than just smut and that you've added quite a bit of humor into it as well. Harry is so funny and such a little pervert!! lol. Great story so far, I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on February 08, 2009
    Good first chapter, many parts of it made me laugh, and I thought you got Harry's awkwardness down to a T
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  • From on February 08, 2009
    Great Story, one of the better erotic/smut stories that i've read
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  • From SalonKitty on February 08, 2009
    Well, this is glorious. I love Harry in this story. So true to canon, yet you manage to make his newfound interests seem like the hidden side of his character that JK forgot to write about.

    More than his "talents", I love how intelligently you've written this. Your introduction of logic is great without seeming beyond any of the characters. Even Harry's example of practiced applications in the Common Room spurring the students into following his lead is sowing the seeds for the DA. The air freshener charm was inspired. And Harry is such a pervy little bugger it's hard not to love him. I realize that Alicia is next on his list (and I loved his brazen flirting with her), but I can't help hoping that Harry does his uptight bff a favor and apply his newly learned techniques to her equally deserving snatch. After all, he owes her.
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