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By : diami25
  • From soldiersgirl0709 on February 08, 2009
    Hi there! Came across this today and thought Id have a look. Not bad at all for a first time writer. Good plot, good writing. Id work on making the chapters a little longer and maybe have look back for some errors. Type-Os are expected without a professional editor, but there were a few "word errors" Like puncture instead of juncture etc. All in all though, its a good start! Ill have another look soon to see if you updated. =)


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on February 08, 2009
    you are definitely right I 've never come across a story like this one! I love the way Hermione just completely turned things around and now Draco is hooked =] Totally awesome. oh and his possessiveness really cute =]

    Please update soon
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  • From bananasforyou on February 08, 2009
    i love it and hope for more, please!!!!
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