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Reviews for Fallen Angels, Fallen in Love

By : numbsickfuck
  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2015
    Fucking hell. You sure know how to write malfoycest. Haven't cum so hard for ages, that is one good story.
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  • From ANON - thzuxdehz on March 24, 2015
    This was really well written, aside from an obscene overuse of the word "androgynous."
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  • From ANON - Endearing on February 07, 2013
    Absolutely wonderful, a delight to read and a story I'll read more than once (:
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  • From numbsickfuck on July 23, 2009
    for Yrael_Nix:

    Ah, thank you very much. *bows*

    (Again, I am not going to review my own story but ...I want an "Answer Review"-button!)
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  • From ANON - Yrael_Nix on July 23, 2009
    Oh hot damn. This is very good. I approve.
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  • From numbsickfuck on June 01, 2009
    (I. Am. Still. Not. Going. To. Review. My. Own. Story. I just feel that if people take time to give me a review, I am rather impolite if I don't answer.)

    For Valo:

    Yay, concrit! I really appreciate.

    1. I am very happy that you liked the story. Thank you.

    2. "Androgynous" ...yeah, there might be too much of it. I am constantly trying to expand my vocabulary to gain more repertoire to fawn over Lucius and Draco all the fucking time. Also I guess I have changed my style of fawning to more concentrated intense fawning over Lucius and Draco in fewer scenes instead of constant low-lever fawning or at least it is one of my goals when I write Malfoycest. ("Androgynous" is part of fawning because of my own sexual preferences when males are concerned.)

    3. Italics. Yes, I have received quite a lot criticism about my overuse of italics and I have seen the error in my ways, so there will be less italics. (My latest fics have been R-rated with not much pr0n so I haven't posted these here but only in my LJ and IJ.) I think my italics use has quite a lot to do with the fact that English is not my native language, so I have been unable to understand that people are able to see strong emphasis on particular words without me pointing them out with big posters with text "HERE!":)
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  • From ANON - Valo on May 31, 2009
    it was a nice read. :]

    The only thing that irked me a bit was the overuse of "androgynous" when you described Draco-- easily overlooked, but it was nagging me in the back of my mind. Same problem with having too many words italicized.

    xValo
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  • From numbsickfuck on April 24, 2009
    For Catium:

    Thank you very, very much! *my heart leaping with joy* Well, I am abso-fucking-lutely obsessed about Malfoycest (currently in process of writing my third Lucius/Draco combined with abusing Harry). Oh, and of course I want to write Lucius and Draco in-character, why ever choose to write fanfiction including any Malfoys without them being evil, manipulative, narcissistic, deceitful and perverted? I am always so happy when people like Malfoys as they are.


    (To be honest, let's just say that I would really, really like to Cruciate every single one redeemed!Draco writer until they mend their ways ...the same goes with redeemed!Lucius too but happily Malfoy senior's personality is not usually raped by fanon.)

    And I have to use a Finnish-English-Finnish word book rather often while writing fanfiction myself. Also, this fic would have been much worse without The Real Luciusmistress' patient and wonderful beta work. (Credits for ones that deserve them:))
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  • From Catium on April 23, 2009
    And I also want to say your writing style is great, it really is a inspiration to every fanfiction writer that doesn't have english as first language. I am from Iceland (a fellow Scandinavian), and I am impressed by how good your english is. There were a lot of words in this fic that I had to look up because I didn't understand them and for me that is always fun, expanding my vocabulary. I love the way you write Draoc and Lucius I think it is totally in character so sarcastic, narcissist, evil...so Malfoy!!! Ahhh...!!!! Loved it! Ssssoooo hot...grrr... My favourite Malfoycest ever (and I've read a lot of them;)
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  • From Catium on April 23, 2009
    Omg this was the fucking hottest malfoycest I've ever read. I am a huge fan of Draco/Lucius especially when they are together;) The kinky side of me loves them.
    Brilliant.
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  • From numbsickfuck on March 05, 2009
    For Nikte: Yay, thank you very much. *bows*

    (Good bitch-slap during sex is just ..euphoric. Sorry to hear that you just have to fantasize about that. I really don't mind information about other people's sex lives, actually it's interesting :D)

    "So hopefully you will write another one-shot of this series, cause I bet, Draco can
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  • From Nikte on March 04, 2009
    Wow, another great story, Lucius is just so sexy =) And you included one of my little fantasies, the slapping during sex, I
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  • From numbsickfuck on February 25, 2009
    For Alvinna:

    Absolute, total fucking THANK YOU SO MUCH that I'm lost for words. (It'd be rather improper to tell I almost climaxed after reading your review ...oh, fuck, I told it.) You saved my whole fucking month. If my fics can serve as a source of inspiration, well, let's just say that is an undescribable pleasure for me.

    I'm also interested in, for example, from which country a writer hails, so there is no need to be sorry. I don't consider conversation as spamming:)

    (By the way, this fic would have been much worse without The Real Luciusmistress' wonderful beta work.)
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  • From Alvinna on February 24, 2009
    I'm sorry, I won't spam you with my talk but I just saw that you are from Finland and it made me so happy since I'm from Sweden, if a fellow Scandinavian can bring forth such amazing work like this then maybe there is a little hope for me ^^'
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  • From Alvinna on February 24, 2009
    I must say, that of all Draco/Lucius fanfiction I have read, no maybe of all Harry Potter Fanfics I've read, this is the undefeated champion. I mean, it took my breath away! The dark sophisticated and yet oh so dirty way of writing you use, it hits ALL of my happy buttons. It has become a source of inspiration for me. I can only wish that one day I will reach your level of writing. Thank you for this wonderful and inspiring piece of work, I will hold my thumbs for more ^^
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