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Reviews for The Most Dangerous Thing a Slytherin Could Do

By : jubilant
  • From ANON - Skye on June 13, 2009
    Hey, if you want I'll beta the entire story for you that way after I beta this chapter I could revise the older ones and you could re-post them. This will keep your fic towards the top, draw more readers and allow you to continue to update on a regular schedule. While waiting for future chappies I'll constantly reread and beta for errors or poor grammar choices. If you're interested let me know what duties you want me to cover while betaing.
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  • From RavenTiger on May 16, 2009
    Hi. I think this story has potential, BUT I think you should use the skills of a beta for grammar and spelling. I'm willing to beta for you if you want. E-mail me if you are intrested at: raventiger@live.com Good luck writing. Raven
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  • From rovingkitty on May 15, 2009
    Hay I like this story don't stop now. Just let your creative side come out and toss it in there.
    Best of luck with the next part

    Kitty
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  • From margaritama on May 14, 2009
    'Eww, really, why couldn't I had just said my cock. Sweet Mother of England.' - Funniest line, I wondered that too as I knew that was what he was thinking.

    Oh, the cliffie...love the Draco POV though and hello yummy Blaise....now what????
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  • From LaihosHatecrew on May 12, 2009
    You left us hanging, no fair! Please update soon!
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  • From margaritama on May 12, 2009
    I can't believe he waited for her after the spat...that was too much. I'm surprised he didn't kiss her. He's all dom Draco-licious though. They are going to be explosive.
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    Hmm, I think Narcissa needs a little bow and heart-tipped arrow.
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    Draco likes Hermione....LOL, my his thoughts are drifting to her more and more. And Narcissa playing cupid is hilarious.
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  • From Avivafae on May 07, 2009
    very cool. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    Is Draco gay??? LMAO! Such a mom thing to think.

    I like Narcissa.
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    Hmm, he really has no idea how to remove that foot from his mouth does he?
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    Hmm, okay story development...just a few questions:

    - How does Narcissa know Hermione plague's his thoughts?

    It just seemed to jump to this with no background. Can you give us a bit of insight? Also, maybe a bit more about Narcissa and Lucius? Is Lucius dead? Narcissa isn't a pureblood fanatic? Will Blaise be in this story?
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    very funny...goodness, Draco is an effing git, isn't he? obviously, the war taught him NOTHING!
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    First, much better in terms of spelling, spacing and grammar...congrats!

    I really like the easy flow of your story. It's a good, quick read and nicely paced. Your chapter lengths work really well with your storytelling. I like your Hermione as well - strong, confident yet still rather girly.

    PS: thanks for letting us know it's post-war! :-)

    Fave phrase: Boy-Who-Kicked-Ass
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  • From margaritama on May 07, 2009
    Hi - I just started reading this...and its quite a nice idea. Good storytelling. And I like your pretty canon characters. The way you set up Slytherin House was very nicely done...the most unique positioning I've ever read.

    Q: Is this post-war? Also, I see you noted that you have some grammar errors. I think it's ok if you don't have a beta but, if I may offer some con-crit advice to help you out. Why not just use your program's spell check and give it a thorough read before posting? Ensure you check your paragraph spacing, etc. This way you can catch as many errors as you can. Don't worry so much if you have fragements or comma issues. Instead, focus on spelling, run-ons and flow of your story, which, again, is strong. *puts down chalk and walks away slowly from the blackboard* :-)

    On to the next chappie. :-)
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