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By : MissLibrarian
  • From nmos on March 06, 2009
    this is sooo good
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  • From neelix on March 06, 2009
    That was brillaint, really dramatic! And she kissed him finally... well his hand anyway! It's a start, right??
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  • From KellyJCR on March 06, 2009
    Wow! That was wonderful. I am a bit upset you killed all the aurors and the healer (I was fond of them and their comradarie). That being said the attack was well written and very exciting to read. I can see the relationship starting to poke its head in soon and just in the nick of time it seems. You really have a great handle on Severus and his changes in his attitude since the war. You write him beautifully. Can't wait for the conclusion. Well done!!!!
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  • From ANON - Laura Dunstan on March 06, 2009
    Oh man how cool is this fic? I loved the first four chappies and I lookforward to reading the next four! Please email me at ratscentral@hotmail.com when you add the next and future chappies!

    Well done!
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  • From ApollinaV on March 06, 2009
    Review and tell me how you feel??? It's bloody brilliant, but I think you already know that. You're keeping it at five...sigh. Well, you can't knock a girl for trying. I can't remember being this excited about a fic in a long time. It's fresh. The action is good. It's got lovely angsty tension. And it's so well written. I can't wait for the final installment.

    The moment when she pulled out Bella's wand was very poignant for me. That was a nice touch.


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  • From CB13 on March 06, 2009
    *Beautiful!* That was the most beautiful fight scene I have ever .... I was going to write, "have ever read," but honestly, I feel as though I **witnessed** it.

    Excellent. I look forward to Chapter 5. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent with the rest of us. I really enjoy the originality of the second-dimensional theory.

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on March 05, 2009
    HUMPH...The Ninja only gets banished? That sucks. LOL. I was hopeing for a full out fight and bringing down of the BAD MAN! LOL...oh well. I did like this chapter anyway. Loved the last bit.

    Red
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  • From ApollinaV on March 01, 2009
    You my dear, are doomed. You say you don't want it to be a long and drawn out fic. I also hear you promising yourself it will only take 5 chapters. Self-deluded, sweetheart. You have a lovely fic on your hands with an exceptional plot developing (against your will possibly) and it's OBVIOUS you like writing it. You're having fun doing it, so I shall from here forward ignore the wibbling. Face it, you're writing a long and drawn out fic. Give into it. Proof? Evidence? Look at your Ch3. What happens? Hermione wakes up, makes tea, brings it to him. Conversations in between. Nothing happened to wrap up towards the conclusion. If there are only 2 more chapters and this is your mid-point, well, you've got to get a move on in advancing the story. And you're leading him into the next chapter to examine her labs, that doesn't have much to do with ninjas, meaning you hopelessly have a longer fic on your hands - SQUEE! You also spent half a page with a dandy detailing of her jumping out of bed to put her jeans on, which I adored, but is condusive to a longer fic. Oh - I'd like to register my theory right now. The blackbird flying past the window is either a familiar/animagus/whatever, but belongs to the plot, not the scenery.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 01, 2009
    Excellent. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From nck12nicholspd on March 01, 2009
    Nice job! I like the way you're pacing the story...it's not like she's going to jump his bones at the first chance (although who could blame her!). Anyway, I'm enjoying this!
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on March 01, 2009
    Okay, I confess that at first I rolled my eyes and snorted at the ninja. I mean, really? But I like it! More would be fantastic.

    xx
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  • From neelix on March 01, 2009
    Brillaint story, I'm really enjoying it. It makes a nice change for Severus to be looking for Hermione instead of the other way around! I hope he doesn't die, though!!
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  • From Happyappy on March 01, 2009
    Is Hermione going to show Severus her hidden potions lab? Then they can work together like he wanted to. Ninjas pending, you just can't let him die, they need to be able to work together in more ways than one! Poor Hermione, Ernie McMillan should have to suffer for what he did to her. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ApollinaV on February 25, 2009
    Yikes, what a twisted little morality tale that's budding here, and I love the intriguing conflict. Sev thinking his assasin is justified in his pursuit, but unwilling to go without a hard fight. And Hermione looking forward to the end, when her life returns to normal, but that may be with Sev's death. Oh, and what then if the Ninja dies? Will Sev just walk away from her? Goodie! Intrigue. I love complicated plots, there's more to sink teeth into. Hmmm, but now I'm hungry for sushi... Excellent my dear, you deserve all accolades. I think the Ninja was wonderful, I don't think it's something we've ever seen. (Much like you're vulnerable Sev) Loving it!
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  • From anncee on February 24, 2009
    ooooooo i'm very very intrigued! more more more!!! =]
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