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Reviews for Far Too Late For Visitors

By : MissLibrarian
  • From Heidi191976 on February 24, 2009
    This is great. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Happyappy on February 24, 2009
    Loved your second chapter. So glad to see that you updated so quickly. Hey, I don't know anything about ninjas either, so what ever you write will be fine with me. I just love a good plot, and yours is shaping up quite finely. Love the vunerability you are showing in your two main characters. Love that the healer is trying to help with more than just healing. Maybe Hermione should have a bad dream that wakes Snape up, and he will have to comfort her.... Keep up the good work.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on February 24, 2009
    Fascinating situation these two found themselves in. I think this will be a favorite story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

    Red
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  • From KellyJCR on February 24, 2009
    Great so far! Love the fact that you have Severus as serious as he has ever been but he seems softer in some ways. Will you be delving into the reasons why Hermione is living a secluded life away from the Weaslys and her past with Ron. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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  • From Happyappy on February 23, 2009
    Wow, this kept me riveted to the screen. Ninjas? Will be looking forward to see how they fit into the english wizarding world. Please update very soon!
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  • From sjrodgers108 on February 22, 2009
    loved it more please thanks
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  • From ApollinaV on February 22, 2009
    Oh fantastic. This has all the makings of a really great story. And the plotline isn't the best part, your storytelling skills are excellent. I love your writing style.
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  • From Tenar10r on February 22, 2009
    Great start! You are very good at descriptions without letting them overwhelm your story :)
    The terse dialogue is perfect.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 22, 2009
    Very interesting start. I look forward to more soon. Thank you. HG4eva
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  • From nck12nicholspd on February 22, 2009
    Love it!
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  • From jessirose85 on February 22, 2009
    That was a great beginning xxx

    It is a type of fic that I can honestly say I have never read before..so please add more to it xxx
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  • From ANON - LauraK on February 22, 2009
    Lovely! I laughed out loud when he said Ninja but it quickly became serious and now I want to know more. Snape persued by Ninja's with enchanted swords? Will he and Hermione have to fight together? Nice beginning and I do want to read more, please.:)
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