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Reviews for PLLEEAASSEE!!!

By : SeverusBabyMomma
  • From sjrodgers108 on February 25, 2009
    love your stories keep them coming please thank you very much.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on February 23, 2009
    I'm sorry to say that I was disappointed with this story. I suppose I had high expectations. Part of the problem was that there was an original character you never had stated in the summery description of the story. The fact that this story more than likely doesn't belong in this area of the HP adultfanfiction website doesn't help either. There's a whole subcategory for that on this site calling for Harry Potter fanfictions with OC Characters. Next is the fact that the writing needs work. It feels choppy and incomplete. It doesn't help that it's painfully short either. Please don't let this review discourage you. You have promise. I can see it there, but it just needs working on. Please give taking a writing course some serious thought. Remember, even diamonds need polishing.
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