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Reviews for If You Can't Be With the One You Love...

By : helenesnape
  • From KellyJCR on March 13, 2009
    Thank you it actually feels finished now. Well done!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tallis37 on March 13, 2009
    Thank you for adding to the ending, I cried so hard after finishing the first version. I'm pleased to see there is now hope for the two of them after all they've been through.
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  • From ANON - Desi on March 13, 2009
    This story is different from others because even though there's a SS/HG relationship there really isn't one, If you get my point.

    but I would like to read more and see where it leads to

    >>Desi
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 28, 2009
    Hello. I like these snippets and I look forward to more soon. Thank you.
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  • From MementoxMori on February 28, 2009
    Thank you for continuing this! I'm so anxious to see what Severus says to Hermione, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Izzie on February 28, 2009
    O I'm so glad you continue! I can't wait for the confrontation with Hermione:)
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  • From neelix on February 28, 2009
    I am really glad you decided to continue this. Apart from a couple of typos, the story is great!
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  • From wishyouwere on February 27, 2009
    Even though your intro says that the story is completed, I cannot see the second chapter being the end. It just does not work somehow. Please wrap tis story up in a way that makes sense; in a way that gives it some kind of conclusion - for better or for worse (but hopefully for the better).
    Great writing!
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  • From KellyJCR on February 27, 2009
    Thank you for contimuing this story. I thought for sure you were going to leave it as a oneshot but, I am thrilled you are going to take it further. It seemed to me right when you got to the juicy part it ended. I am looking forward to more after all how do you close a chapter of your life that you started 20 years ago. Even more how do you stop living a way of life that you chose as penance. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Izzie on February 27, 2009
    You HAVE to continue this. Please, make it a long story!!! Honestly the idea is grant...
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  • From ANON - LauraK on February 24, 2009
    Harsh!! This needs continuing.....could be a very good, angsty story. I can't believe Severus would stupidly hold onto Lily when he was a willing wife who obviously has feelings for him.....
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  • From wudelfin on February 23, 2009
    damn that was just wrong
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  • From MementoxMori on February 23, 2009
    I wish this was more than a one shot. I just hate the idea that Severus is still so enamoured with Lily, when in my opinion, she was only a fair weather friend to him, and all in all didn't treat him very well. I honestly think this could be explored more. I'm by no means saying it wasn't good, because it was. I don't know sometimes I'm a little far fetched with my hopes that Severus could find the love that he desires and have it be a love that is worthy of him. It was hard to read something so sad though! But great job, none the less!
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  • From ANON - emmylovedraco on February 23, 2009
    please update some more it was a great start.. really sad and cold but i love it. please update soon.. PLEASE''''''
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  • From ANON - sevra28 on February 23, 2009
    please, please, please! Write more.
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