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By : isisborn
  • From Persy on January 09, 2022

    Aw, come on now, where us the rest of it!!!!???


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  • From Persy on July 20, 2021

    Where is the rest of it???!!!!


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  • From Heidi191976 on February 24, 2009
    If you want your story to be a great one, then you are going to have to make the chapters a lot longer then this one. This chapter was way too short. You also need to tell the readers what the realationship is between Severus and Hermione is. Are they married? Dating? Does she just work with him? Then you need to tell more about Sam. Who is she? These are just a few suggestions. If you write longer chapters, I might actually enjoy reading it.
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