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Reviews for A Series of Connecting the Dots

By : Digitallace
  • From automatikjoy on April 07, 2009
    AH! This story is so AMAZING lol
    I cant get enough, you guys are perfectly balanced
    and totally unpredictable.
    With them minipulating each other
    and the forced friendship and of course the desire lol
    this has unlimited potential.
    GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!!!!!
    I cant wait to see what happens next
    update soon!!! pretty please Im so addicted!!!

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  • From ANON - delyn on April 04, 2009
    I'm enjoying your story, I think you're developing the characters well. I do think it would be more effective to not re-hash the same seen from different points of view. It pulls a story down needlessly. The same effect could be gained from a few sentences on one character's reaction as they think back on their last interaction, then get on with the next event. I only offer this advice because I think your story has much potential.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 04, 2009
    Sooooooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on April 04, 2009
    hmm i think draco should grab harry and molest him against the nearest wall but hey that's just me lol
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  • From tiggator on March 23, 2009
    I'm definitely enjoying it. :) How clever for the two of you to write something like this! I love it. Keep up the great work. Always love your stories.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 22, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From automatikjoy on March 22, 2009
    mmm the Malfoy menace lol
    Perhaps through all their plotting and manipulations
    they might fall in love despite one another??
    This story's a great challenge for you guys and
    I wish you both the best of luck!!!
    Cant wait to read more :)
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  • From Daktalakpak on March 08, 2009
    This is so great! :D
    Keep up the good work! I am really fascinated where this story might lead :)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on March 08, 2009
    well well looks like they'll have fun playing each other. lol. can't wait to see more
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 07, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 3!!! What happens next?
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 27, 2009
    Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on February 25, 2009
    lol this seems funny. can't wait for the next
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