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Reviews for Deliver Me

By : Ann10550
  • From Orkchild on October 13, 2009
    Wonderful story. Can't wait to read the next installment even if it is another month. I love that you write nice long juice chapter.
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on October 13, 2009
    I found, after starting to read the chapter, that I had to go back and read previous chapters before I could continue. Not because you haven't posted for a while, but because the detail you put in your story is extrordinary. Whether it is truth, fiction ,canon or not, the detail is well thought out and very interesting and makes the story more enjoyable to read. Also, the side stories make the main story more believable and gives depth and personality even to the original characters, something that is rare in fictions. I believe sometimes an author wants to move the story faster and leaves out these details to get the chapter done and out and that can be a good thing but I'm really enjoying the effort you are putting into this story. It was certainly worth the wait. I raise my glass of ice tea to you for a wonderful story.
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  • From LadyLaran on June 19, 2009
    Nice research and delivery of the story. I'll be watching for more. I truly hope that Harry doesn't get caught up romantically with the offspring of that ass of a grandfather or whatever that ditched his grandfather and mother.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2009
    I noticed a couple other reviews mentioning "Revenge a Dish Best Served Cold" by Raven102. I looked it up on FF.N and it looks like Raven102 is Guardian of the Phoenix, whom I believe you had plagiarism issues with before. It looks like He/She may be trying to rewrite, but a lot of it still looks the same in the 3 chapters that are posted here and on FF.N.
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  • From ANON - lilywood on April 23, 2009
    I love this story! - but there is one called "Revenge is a dish best served cold" by Raven102 that is VERY similar to this one. Same plot, same sentences (sometimes), not very well written. It's TOO similar, you should check it out.
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  • From Sakya on April 22, 2009
    Hi, I just left you a message at HPfandom... of course, it was only after that I found out you also post here.

    Well, there is a fic that is VERY similar to yours (only three chapters so far and in desperately need of a beta) and I thought you should know.

    The author
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  • From coopershawk on April 13, 2009
    Please include "I make no money from this" on your disclaimer so this story isn't pulled. I am delighting in your story and look forward to more. Thanks for writing this.
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  • From ANON - Sagesasami on April 12, 2009
    I love you story first one I've come across with such long chapter and well done plot. Can't wait for the next chapter, take your time no rush have a nice Easter!
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  • From Darkless on April 11, 2009
    I just found this story and have been enjoying myself thouroughly in every chapter. All the bashing is a bit hard to take, but as you said, it's your plot and some things are important to make it go a certain way. And, yes, the Voldie/Snape pairing is also hard to envision. I just can't see Snape being all lovey-dovey with ol' Snake Face...but I'll go with the flow. I'm glad that they are not the focus of the story.

    Yay Harry! Don't let those sycofants and betrayers knock you down. Walk tall and take your rightful place in the world. 'Aunt' Augusta better watch his back amoung High Society gathering; words can draw blood and kill one's reputaion and standing. I've read a lot of regency romances when I was younger and totally understand how that game is played.

    The chapters are well written and thought-out. Please continue.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on April 09, 2009
    I just loved the scene at #12. The kids getting into a fight only means that the adults were afraid to get into it because they still have hopes of getting Harry to forgive and be under their control again. They of course would not act like children. I believe Harry could actually call in the aurors as the order was the ones who threw the first real hex, (I don't consider the silence charm thrown at Molly a hex) and in Harry's own house. I do believe they forgot it was Harry's house and not theirs, just like they forgot they had been actually stealing from Harry for so long too. Great Chapter.
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  • From ANON - nicole on April 09, 2009
    I love your story it is so interesting cant wait to read more.Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Pillan on April 08, 2009
    For some reason, as soon as I read Harry's reaction to Leon, I think he is the OC Harry will date. Am I right? Then again, don't tell me, it'll be better to be surprised. :)

    It's a great story, good enough for me to bother to review. I NEVER review stories. Which is probably a bad thing, but as I am currently reviewing your story, it's deffinitly a compliment to the story and your writing.

    Although there is a few grammar mistakes, I think you did a GREAT job. I know how tough school life can be, and I'm impressed at how you managed to write over 13.000 words. Personally, I never manage to write more than maybe a few thousands.

    As I said, great story! Do update soon. Please?
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 08, 2009
    Another great chapter!

    I love how you kicked the order out!

    I JUST HOPE THAT THE REST OF HARRY'S FAMILY IS NOT LIKE THE WISCHARDS I HATE THEM ALREADY!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2009
    I wouldn't mind seeing Harry take the moral high ground a little more than he has been. I'm not saying he should bite the bullet and forgive anyone - no way! - but some of his actions lately have seemed kind of petty.
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  • From PandaGaara on April 08, 2009
    That was so...AMAZING!!
    I feel a bit bad for Harry, because everyone is out for his fortune. And I hope the Wischard family gets thrown on thier asses! I think Luna would hex anyone for trying to steal her man..*laughs evilly* I can't wait to see that XD.
    I aslo can't wait to formally meet the OC who Harry will be with! KYAA! I hope he has a bitchin name and a soul piercing stare that melts you from inside out!! MWUAHAHA!!
    Lol, I've been reading to many fanfics XD
    Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter.
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