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From tommye on June 13, 2009
5 stars for this chapter. I liked the fact that Harry and Hermione had sex. I was disturbed by the way Harry treated Hermione afterwards but I wasn't that shocked tbh. He must have felt used by Hermione along with everything else that was going on. I was surprised at Hermione taunting him about Luna and then Harry pinning her down. That was another great scene. And I can't wait to find out how Luna is going to react to finding out about H/Hr. And what happened to the locket? hmmmmmmm. Can't wait for more Harry/Luna and I hope there are going to be more threesomes/moresomes.
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From Pete91888 on June 13, 2009
Great chapter. Is Harry really loosing it? He is starting to seem like the horcrux has almost completly taken over. Definatly looking forward to the next instalment.
By the way I read this Harry Fleur story called 'The Lie I've Lived' by 'JBern' not sure whether or not you like the pairing but the story is great. Very well written. Also what did you think of the finaly of 'Bella's Harem'?
See you next time.
Pete
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From ninjamonkey26 on June 11, 2009
*sighs* Sry I wasn't clear with it (take into account my status as rabid h/hr/(female moresome if possible)) but I rly didn't like the way it turned out between them. I can understand the h/l ship and I was reading the story and enjoying that portion immensely. I just saw no need to take the h/hr action in such a dark direction. I'd rather have seen a jkr moment pulled where h/hr stayed purely platonic the entire time than almost rape :-(. I sincerely believe they could have had encounters that while not culminating in love most certainly didn't have to end like that regardless of hoxcrux influence or not due to the strength of H/Hr long-term friendship, hell for the sake of that I'd wager that even Hr would be a lot more submissive just for him. Thats my clarified .02 cents carry on and ignore this rant :-)
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From MrStrike on June 11, 2009
...godDAMN, I love this fic. Seriously, coming home and seeing a new chapter made my night.

Been following for awhile now and this has quickly become one of my favourite Harry/Luna fics, certainly one of the most memorable fanfics I've read, of any pairing. The first few chapters were a bit of struggle to overcome, what with the whole Luna revelation. Too many fics out there are just a mix of shit writing, cheap, transparent angst and unjustified Mary Su/Gary Stu-ness, but to think I'd have missed out the best.. and only, admittedly, Harry/Luna BDSM fanfics I'll probably ever read. Unimaginable! ....and the author has great taste in music, what a plus!

In summary, this story is a fucking hoot and I eagerly look forward to any updates.
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From ninjamonkey26 on June 07, 2009
*deadpans* no, no, not at all... *highly disappointed in how it was handled*
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From serenagold on June 06, 2009
Wow. Such a powerful, emotionally intense chapter. Hermione really knows how to compartmentalize, doesn't she?

I really overall enjoyed this chapter. Hermione was pretty selfish in using Harry to suit her own needs. She really doesn't like to give an inch. Although everybody needs their coping methods I guess. I think, much like Harry, that she isn't one to let on as much when she's terribly scared and I loved her shout of desperation at the end. Although she obviously isn't remembering the number one rule of horror movies (and lets face it, their situation is horrible): the girl who doesn't want to die a virgin usually gets her wish by generally dying after being seen on screen having sex. lol

I think my favorite part of the chapter was the two of them opening up to each other. I think you hit Hermione's back story and experience right on the nose. Keep up the fantastic work!
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From tommye on June 06, 2009
WOW is probably all I can say. I think I can say that this is my favourite chapter yet. I was expecting the Harry/Hermione to be a one off. But when they started engaging in their activities more often and when they were so close to sex by the end of the chapter, I wanted more. I didn't think that they would actually go all the way and have sex, but because they were so close to it, it opened new doors. Now I think that there is a chance that they might have sex. Maybe after the Godric's hollow visit. Maybe even before, if they think they might die on the visit to Godric's Hollow. Will Harry give in to Hermione's demands? That question will have to wait. And I cannot wait for it to be answered.

Keep up the good work on your amazing story,
Please update very soon
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From PotterEntourage on June 06, 2009
POW.ER.FUL! I can't even think straight right now! The comfort they tried and failed to glean from each other is just....woah! Once again, Dom!Harry blows my mind! *standing ovation*
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From Pete91888 on June 06, 2009
Well I've finally gotten up to speed with the story. I sort of wanted to wait until the end to make sure that I wouldn't be dissapointed, and I can honestly say that I wasn't. I've read a lot of fics that start out great and by the middle I just get so sick and frustrated with it.
However you have done a very good job with this one. Actually I think your style of writing is one of the best I've seen. Your chapters flow very well, the sex scenes are very well written and thought out, and I'm constantly drawn to what your going to write next I don't feel the need to skip through in order to move on.
When you finish this story I'd very much like it if you let me know when you start your Harry/Bella story or any other fic you start.
So once again great story and I look forward to another great chapter.
Pete
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From NutsAboutHarry on June 06, 2009
Un that was a bit full on! Not to my usual taste but it was very well written and I look forward to the next chappie.

Well done
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From PotterEntourage on June 04, 2009
I'm not even going to lie, my eyes were welling up with tears when Harry was telling Ginny that he was with Luna. God! How humiliating to be told that IN FRONT of the man you love(d) new girlfriend! Luna's punishment was amazing, as was all of it! Oh, Harry, what a creative little bugger! I sooo can't wait to see what you have next for us! I'm super curious to see if you're going to eventually whip this around and make it Harry/Ginny canon, but with this wild ride, I hardly care!!! WHEEEEE!
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From tommye on June 03, 2009
Well, Well, Well. I certainly wasn't disappointed in this chapter. The smut was just amazing. It was very detailed. I'm glad you never made it too brief. Lol at Ginny sucking Harry's balls. The only part that I think was missing is what happens between Harry and Hermione while Ron is gone. Oh well I'll just have to wait until the next chapter. Like you said yourself you didn't buy it when nothing happened between Harry and Hermione while Ron wasn't there.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more,
Please update very soon.
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From pettrum on June 03, 2009
That was just brilliant - love the story, I'm eager to see where it's all going (and what sex they'll have along the way!)
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From SoftObsidian74 on June 02, 2009
Madness! LOL.Ginny and Luna are hot together, but LMAO at Harry refering to his cock as "Chosen cock". someone is getting a little full of themselves, eh? I enjoyed Luna's punishment, even if Ginny did not. lol. Hopefuly the DA meetings will resume properly and Ginny can get some revenge and protection. Very interesting and fun update.
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From radiofishlips on June 02, 2009
wow so hot ... i love the fire in Ginny of course im a little upset hary didnt end up fucking the stuffing out of Ginny but the rest of it was hot and as believable as all hell. i cant wait to see wher you take ginny now that she has what i hop is a taste for the power that the life can bring .. and i can see Luna beocmming firmly attached to Ginny as her mistress when harry's not available... yet another one of those things that i have seen in my time in the lifestyle...

you know i think i love the way your characters are kinda uncertain in their actions and groping about through the introduction and the feelings that can be bought up in the lifestyle. im also wondering wher your ging with Hermione and Ron assuming that your loosely sticking to cannon with Rons return to the Trio. i want to see Hermione and hr get to the nasty as well tho i have a feeling im dreaming ahin with that ... tho in the not dreaming realm i can see hermione wanting to know how this works for harry..

oh well me and the girls love it even if M dosent want to admit it.
love to you from Pet and me
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