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By : SalonKitty

From LondonMarie on June 02, 2009
I like Ron for his humor and he makes me laugh, but I don't like him in general. I find his character very immature. And in many of the books he throws hissy fits, and I'm like dude! man up! I just don't understand how Hermione who's intelligent would be with someone who's like a kid. His emotional depth really isn't there. And I liked the idea of Hermione with someone who will challenge her intellectually and push her to be her best, and support her. Ron mocks her throughout the entire series. As for this chapter I'm like in your face Ginny! Sure she gets pleasure but uh-uh no "Chosen cock" for you. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From serenagold on June 02, 2009
Whooooaaaaaaaaaa doggie!! lol That was freaking great!! And what a good way to get everything out in the open. ^^ That was a hell of a threesome! My god. And so quickly updated too.

I feel like its Christmas!
Keep up the great work!
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From tommye on June 01, 2009
I just can't get enough of this story. The stuff that Carrow did to Ginny was pretty disturbing. But I loved the part where Ginny and Luna got off with each other. Especially the bit where Ginny rode Luna's face. I really cannot predict what is going to happen in the next chapter. I don't know if Harry is going to be angry or happy Luna brought Ginny along. I can't tell whether Harry is going to fuck both Ginny and Luna. And is Hermione going to get involved or will she just be watching again? Or will Hermione get off with Harry in private in the tent when Ginny and Luna leave? And it's going to be Ginny's first time too. I just cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm dying with anticipation here.

Please update very soon.
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From serenagold on June 01, 2009
Ha! Ginny's hello was priceless. ^^

I've personally never been much for yuri, but I have to say I loved the scene between Luna and Ginny on the bed. Very sensual and comforting. Although I suppose if I had to go through what Ginny was, I might be seeking the comfort of another woman too. I've never been so skeeved after reading what you wrote about that creepy pervy Carrow. Eww..gross!! lol

Keep up the great work!
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From PotterEntourage on May 31, 2009
See, you have got to stop writing because YOU ARE BLOWING MY MIND!!!!! Poor Ginny having to go through all of that! Her emotions are on a roller coaster, and WHAT. A. RIDE! Man, I can't wait to see what happens with the 3 of them, I could speculate, but I'll just wait not so patiently until the next update! And Ronnikins! Oh, that poor dear! That time away is good for him though, looking forward to his new attitude about "everything" when he gets back! As always, awesome!
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From SoftObsidian74 on May 31, 2009
You keep surprising me with where you're taking this story...incredibly unpredictable yet it's all credible. lol. Whoa and the frank conversation between Luna and Ginny and where it ended up. that was really intense. Ginny is a total domme, which fits her personality. It's so sick what Carrow has been doing to her. I hope he gets his. LOL@Ginny punching Harry...he did have that coming. looking forward to seeing if Harry arranges a threesome with his former girlfriend and current one. That would be wild indeed. I think he can handle it though : ) Not sure if Ginny can..lol. Yay for Ron and Bill...he needed that. I loved how you delved into his insecurities and fears. Great update.
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From acky on May 30, 2009
can't wait for the next chapter and what im sure will be more yummy luna/ginny with hopefully a lot of Harry thrown in there. I'd love the idea of making Harry watch while the girls do whatever they please
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From LondonMarie on May 30, 2009
I'm glad that you missed me. lol. I'm jus wondering where you're planning to take this story. And as for the couples I'm not sure who's gonna end up with who. For some reason I have a feeling that Luna's gonna die and Harry and Ginny are going to be together. The interaction with the Trio(Ron, Hermione, and Harry) made me feel squiken(Sp?) I don't know why. I probably would've liked it better if it was just Harry and Hermione. I really don't like Ron, so I'm hoping in that aspect you'll veer from the book and kill him off. I can't wait for the next chapter and Harry's reaction to Ginny being there.
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From spikeprop on May 30, 2009
I LOVE this fic, and can't wait to see what happens with the 3 of them!
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From radiofishlips on May 29, 2009
ok initial review of this chapter places you deep into the writer of evil cliffies group

though in all seriousness i like it, ill post another review later with a more in depth review when i have had time to read it a couple more times.
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From tommye on May 20, 2009
I never would have expected the Carrows to be so sexual. I liked the way you brought Snape back onto the good side by suggesting to Luna to steal Gryffindor's sword. I'd love to see Ginny and Luna talk about how Harry and Luna ended up sleeping with each other. I hope the DA reform and have a massive gangbang lol. Btw I'm loving these two part chapters. It's like double the fun in one chapter.

Can't wait to read more
Please update very soon.
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From SoftObsidian74 on May 20, 2009
Kitty, this really is an amazing piece of work you have going on here. I agree with PE, the way you're using canon to tell your story WHILE you fill in gaps that JKR didn't share is just brilliant. I love your take on what was going down in the school while the Trio was on their horocrux hunt. I can so see all of this happening, especially with the Carrows at the helm and with Snape having his hands tied so to speak. I love Luna's perceptive ability, it's one of her most awesome characteristics. This chapter had me biting my nails, very intense and gripping. But go Luna for setting that bitch straight. lol@ "No, I
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From PotterEntourage on May 19, 2009
;aljdfoprthkal;dsjhflskj;afj You are a fricking genius! The way you weave canon.............how you give us a glimpse of the "missing" moments when the trio were on the hunt.........*ded* Honestly woman, you kill me!
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From serenagold on May 19, 2009
I loved your take on what was going on inside the school. The scene with Snape and Luna was great. I love how she picked up on his actual nature rather than Harry's perception of 'obvious villian.' Although this chapter answers NOTHING regarding what happened to Ron! The cliff hanger remains!

Keep up the great work!
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From radiofishlips on May 19, 2009
hey there sexy. ok so im guessing you know who this is [insert evil laugh here]the three of us have just finished reading the latest and i have to say we all loved it which is clearly evidenced by the fact that that the whore fuckslut i live with is currently trying to fuck her masters cock off and i will be a touch upset if she dosn't leave any for me ...

seriously tho you asked Josh for me to leave a review so hear goes i love it. the place your going with Snape is interesting and Ginny's issues are great, really believable, im not so sure about the whole threesome in the tent thing tho it did lead into Ron leaving fairly well. and i have to say i love Hermione's reaction to seeing Harry and Luna.. i guess me being the romantic that i am i would have liked to see Hermione and Ron finish up the truth/dare game fucking like bunnies as harry sat on guard smiling like a mad thing. perhaps a little ooc for Hermione but then again this is Fannon so who knows.

The ideas you and Josh were talking about with Ginny getting her stomp on with Mr nasty DE are ok i guess but i think you need to wait till later. well thats if you go with the Ginny/Luna visit harry thing. im also wondering how Hermione is going to deal with her now outed sexuality ok so perhaps not fully outed but at least awoken. i can see a few way that it could go and all be within the bounds of the story.

i love the tattoo and piercing ideas but im sorry josh has some really fucken hot plans for Different in terms of bodymod (so hot that im jucing up thinking about them) though i have to say he probably just gets the ideas from looking at me. Although if he goes ahead with the magical/muggle brand idea that will be ground breaking. ok so enough about my dreams there and back to you.

yep love it, all good, its not predictable at all which is a huge plus (almost as bug as Ron apparently what made you make Ron a sizable chap and is Hermione creaming herself dreaming of getting that stuffed into her or arm i just getting horny again)

ok anywho sexy im off to find an electrical boyfriend till the sluts finished then im gonna see what i can get myself... wish me luck ... oh and i think Different will be out soon (glares at Josh)
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