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By : SalonKitty

From SoftObsidian74 on April 04, 2009
I love how in character you're keeping everyone. Ron, especially, is usually under and totally mis-characterized. You're in all of their heads and yet you're putting your own flavor on it.It makes this story so very intriguing and keeps me on edge about what the characters will do next. I LOVED Ron's reaction to seeing what Harry was up to. LOL@him trying NOT to think about Harry's proclivities even as he's wanking as a result of what he witnessed. And whoah! Harry is turning into quite the Master. I love his experimentation and just go for it attitude. The rope bondage scene was just YUM. Bravo for that. I'm kinda glad Ron knows, it may force Harry to make a decision and come out with his love of Luna. His LOVE for Luna, I'm so so happy that came out, even if he wasn't conscious of it, its on the table now. I hate that he had to leave her. I hope they can find a way to be together in spite of what's to come. Can't wait to see what's gonna go down next chapter. As always excellent Kitty!

Oh, and I just have to respond to someone who asked that you not pair Hermione with Ron because he's "not on her level". I'm not sure anyone is on Hermione's level so that would doom her to being single forever if we went by that logic. Also, there is no evidence that Ron is 'dumb' in the HP books, that's a fanfiction characterization that has become "fact". Nobody who plays chess the way he does can be dumb, and being a teenage boy who can sometimes be thoughtless and pratty doesn't make one dumb.

Whatever you decide to do, I know you'll do it while honoring each of the characters with the obvious love you have for them. Keep it coming, Kitty.
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From NutsAboutHarry on April 04, 2009
Ack a cliffie!

I seriously cannot wait to see what happens I'm hoping Ron isn't to much of an arse.

I loved the emotional complexity of this chapter and I hope you update soon!

Well done!
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From serenagold on April 04, 2009
Wow. I loved Luna's break down. Those two are so all over each other its upsetting to see them part.

Although I admit I laughed out loud to see Ron perched up in this bed waiting for Harry to come home like some angry father figure. ^^ I can't really blame Ron, Harry is one secretive fucker, but lol damn. Too damn funny.

Keep up the great work!
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From LondonMarie on April 03, 2009
grrr...cliff hanger? GOD. You have to update soooon. I'm dying here. I want it to be over, so i know if harry and luna end up together in the end, but then I also don't. Luna/Harry stories are hard to find, and sometimes they aren't all that good. Then sometimes people just abandon them. I'm loving this story sooo much. But please, please, please don't let Hermione end up with Ron or one of the Weasley brothers. She needs someone intellectual to keep up with her. And let's face it Ron is not at her level. Great Chapter. I understand why you couldn't split up the chapters. It would've of been choppy. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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From chocoman on April 02, 2009
alright here i go...........(this pause is for suspense)............................ FUCKING AWSOME. in 12 the voy scene with Remus was perfect everything from the internal monologue about why he married Tonks (which is way more realistic than how J.K wrote it) in the first place all the way to his reaction of seeing a psuedo son having very kinky in broad daylight in the middle of a park ( i hope it encouraged Remus to let go a little bit in bed........... which would probably lead to a MUCH more satisfied Tonk. also loved Remus little flash back to James and LIly........... you know i think all Mauraders had a thing for Lily and of course a future Death Eater whom no matter how selfless he is i just couldn't seem to like.

now in 13 the whole other harry's getting boners to was fantastic...... also harry's growing awareness of Hermione and how smoking she is................. come on just tell me is harry going to get into Hermione's pants to............... come on.......... you can tell me............. promise i wont tell anyone ............... cross my heart......................................... alright fine i'll wait. im also loving harry's growing need for luna. wait SIDENOTE you made me feel Hedwig's death all over again.... in a way i was kinda hoping you'd take a AU twist and let her live............ but i guess it did increase Luna and Harry's bond.......both sexually and emotionally. this whole relationship they gotgoing on is one of the most realistic Dom/Sub relationship story i've every read. you know Harry's need for control going to far then he feels bad, but the our lovely Sub just views her inability to handle the abuse as a sign of her own weakness and then taking the blame onto herself and fears losing her beloved Dom............. i got lost........ alright back to Hedwig. the whole painting her on Luna's masterpiece as well line almost made me cry. everything was sooooooooo deliciously naughty as always. please keep it coming and cuming and cuming Kitty Cat

Coco
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From SoftObsidian74 on March 31, 2009
Brutal chapter, emotionally wise I mean. I could feel Harry's turmoil. The way he released on Luna was rough. Especially since we know what she's been through. But even though he was very rough with her, I could still feel his need, and hers, and that made it very hot. I like how they're both pushing and pulling. They want so much from each other, but they also want to take care of each other. For Harry that's a hard lesson to learn (how far to push and not cross the line). He went too far this time, but I'm glad he didn't hurt her too bad. I'm happy Luna didn't feel victimized by Harry but only viewed it as too much for her to handle. It does makes me sad that she blames herself for it, but that's understandable considering how much she gets out of pleasing him. This was so intense emotionally that the sexual experience only underscores that. The last bit with Luna asking to add Hedwig to her drawing (which I love that you included BTW) and Harry breaking down was so realistically written. Excellent writing! My heart is breaking for Harry all over again. Well done as always, Kitty!
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From LondonMarie on March 31, 2009
I'm really excited about this story. I can't for the next chapter. I love the whole idea of Harry and Luna.
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From serenagold on March 31, 2009
lol hellz yeah I noticed it! I thought that was funny too, but then again, I guess he wouldn't have exactly been able to get a license for it anyway. Its probably one of those things where they have no way of knowing, but if you go and get yourself splinched, then you best be able to prove you knew what you were doing or probably have to face heavy fines. ^^

You know whats funny, I hardly remember the part where Moody got killed. I guess his death was as inconsequential to me as it was to Harry. hehehe

Keep up the great work!
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From NutsAboutHarry on March 28, 2009
Harry got a very funny feeling. But when the whiny Mundungus gave a saucy cry and declared,
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From LondonMarie on March 28, 2009
well i had thought that you were going to have voldemort have them. Poor Harry, that would be so embarassing. can't wait until you update.
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From SoftObsidian74 on March 28, 2009
OMFG!! This chapter was PRICELESS. From Lupin's voyeurism to the dopplegangers getting wood. You're doing a wonderful AU take on canon events and with such humor and natural flow it almost feels like JKR writing a dirty book, only a bit better! I love Lupin's musings while Luna and Harry were getting their freak on, and man, Harry's really getting the hang of this stuff, huh? HOTNESS : ) LOL@Harry's mind going to Tonks and Hermione like that...dirty boy! What a fun update : )
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From serenagold on March 27, 2009
How shocked were you when the owl died in the last book? I remember reading that and getting so upset, but then when I tried to find people to sympathize I got nothing but indifference! I'm sorry, but that moment caught me so quick and so off guard! :(

Oh well. Next chapter is at the burrow!! Harry gets to see Luna again! I loved that scene when they go to Luna's home. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Keep up the great work!
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From SoftObsidian74 on March 26, 2009
Awesome. I love that Luna is coming to some realizations about herself and how she's responding to Harry, I love that they're talking about it. Her waking up to him staring at her and her fears was so real, especially after what she had just told him. I LOVED Harry's reassurance to her that she is girlfriend material, and I hope he does take up with her when all of this over with. I still can't wait to see that go down. What I really love is how we're seeing Luna through Harry's and Dudley's eyes and how unfair and misguided the other kids at school look because of it. She's hot : )And Yay for deep throating, go Luna! I envy her. lol. I love how hot you're making their sex but still very natural and normal for their age and development. The stuff with Dudley is just so funny/cute/awkward. It refreshing to read. The whole breakfast scene was just priceless. Now the spanking scene....wow. I love the psychology and how you even build up to that scene...so freakin' hot and cathartic I'm sure for Harry after what happened to him. Very nice : ) More please : )
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From serenagold on March 26, 2009
Ha! I knew Luna would uncover the truth some how. (What a kinky way to get into slapping eh? Wink wink, nodge nodge, say no more.) ;)

Hehehe. I greatly enjoyed breakfast with the Dudders. Keep up the great work!
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From LondonMarie on March 26, 2009
i can't wait to see how the others react to luna and harry. it's a little odd that his aunt and uncle are gone like all the time. update soon please.
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