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Reviews for Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen

By : SalonKitty
  • From Raynee on March 16, 2009
    Love this fic, I hope this is strictly Luna/Harry an does not turn into some sort of Harem fic (and please no Ginny, more than enough of those) there are far to few good Lu/H fics out and your is one of the best. So sad Luna may not be able to have a child, but that is not definite is it? The convo between father and daughter was ver believable I had the same sort of relationship with my mother. Keep up the good work.
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  • From LondonMarie on March 16, 2009
    i need another chapter soon please.
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  • From serenagold on March 13, 2009
    I liked the tense strain within their open and honest discourse. its an odd relationship that the two of them have and you could really feel his slight discomfort and at the same time his encouragement and support of his daughter as a woman. I thought it was a great moment between them. Awkward but great. Both Lovegoods are so surrounded in whimsy and fantasy that a break into reality seems misplaced, but delightfully real. ^^

    Keep up the great work. I love how much of a degenerate Harry is becoming. (I always knew it would be the internet that would be his downfall into depravity. Bwahhahahahaha. hehhehhehehe. =^^= )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 13, 2009
    I'm speechless.....the porn...the fucking porn. You described it perfectly and even more importantly, you described Harry's reaction to it perfectly. I love the way you're taking us with him on this discovery of this hidden side of his sexuality. What shocking images those must have been for him, and every revelation and his reaction to it was just spot on and yummy. I love love his thoughts while he was wanking, he's a natural Dom isn't he? I'm gonna fucking cream on myself. This is probably the best inner dom!Harry analysis I've ever read. Taking notes from you girly. Luna is in trouble! lol. I can't wait...
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 12, 2009
    Damn Harry is one bad motherfucker!! I can't believe he did that! Wow. I really loved where you took his mind in this chapter, he's so randy and curious and just confused. It all seems so natural. The way he was talking and then doing double action with Ginny and Luna was just masterful. And so well told. lol. I totally broke out in a grin when he let Hermione flitter into his thoughts and then quickly dismissed it. But yes, Harry, show Luna what a dirty boy you are. I'm glad that you're keeping him IC and that he feels some guilt over what's going on, it makes it passionate and compulsive that way. Ginny is true to form, what a piece of work. I can't wait to see how this turns out for them. Especially since really she is his ex now. I love how you're weaving this alongside canon, it really does feel like another perspective of one of the novels, excellent. Oh, and what great usage of actually Brit expressions, it elevates this story above most fan fiction, well that any your way with words. Can't wait to see what Harry and Luna get into next, and if Harry would dare try any of this on Ginny.
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  • From serenagold on March 11, 2009
    Wow. So much has happened in the last two chapters I don't even know where to begin.

    You are a phenomenal author and I want you to know that I will be adding this story to my highly recommended list. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 10, 2009
    OMFG! You are so in my head Salon_Kitty...I'm like totally blown away. This was a powerful powerful update and the way Harry has claimed Luna is just SEXY as fuck! I felt so bad that once again she let herself be exploited by the Slytherins, but then Harry comes and rescues her. His response was totally unexpected, especially the slap and the berating, but it was so fucking hot. You've really captured the whole D/s element to their relationship and if this is just the beginning I'm gonna fucking explode. I can't tell you how hot that was, but you probably already knew that. Oh and down with Ginny! lol. Please update this fabulous story soon.
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  • From serenagold on March 09, 2009
    I love this story. ^^
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 08, 2009
    Harry is so bloody sneaky...but still true to his character. I LOVE your Harry...he's everything times ten that I love about the boy. Him going off on Hermione out of frustration was hilarious. And I love how he's noticing Luna in a completely different light now. She is a sorta of sexy character, and the way you're pointing out how quirky and different she is in the midst of all of the rest through Harry's eyes, makes her more so. I love the glimpses into both Harry and Luna's thoughts and background. You're fleshing her out really well and it all rings true. love that she met him with the clear intention of giving him some more. lol. Go Luna! Harry's reaction was perfect, and it seems like they are in the beginning of some thing intense and very satisfying. I do worry about Harry's relationship with Ginny and wonder how all of this is going to be resolved. I personally hope he ditches her. If they get found out its going to be pure scandal and drama. Oh, and Harry in this chapter, although full of drive and pure sexiness, was also very sweet and caring...so IC. He's so complex and I love the way you're writing him, did I say that already? lol. Anyway, great chapter, hot sex, and just great writing.
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  • From DarQuing on March 07, 2009
    I didn't really see enough of Ginny to decide whether she was good for him or not, but from what I saw of Hermione and Luna, I think they're my favorite choices for Harry, though more Hermione than Luna.

    Please update soon! :)
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 05, 2009
    Salon Kitty, what an amazing chapter. I can't believe how deep you're going into both Harry and Luna's psyche. I love Harry's demand for Luna to reveal what happened and I can't believe how nonchalant and matter of fact Luna was about what was done to her by the Ravenclaw and Sytherin boys. Draco sucks here! And I think its definitely rape. But I can totally see her going through something like this in canon. You really know these characters well and I love your use of language. OMG, Harry going down on her and taking her, and how she awkwardly almost killed the mood but how he kept going and told her to shut up? PERFECT characterization of both of them. And you still managed to make it so very hot. Very hot. I loved the imagery you gave Harry during the encounter, it rings true considering all that was said and what he had just been through. I love that he realizes what he wants and how it feels dirty but good and innate. This is gonna be a delicious explorations of sexuality, bdsm and emotions and I can't wait for more.
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  • From chocoman on March 04, 2009
    wow........... i mean just....... holy crap that was a perfect mixture of pure emotion and some deliciously twisted erotic fun. the only thing i have to say is ewwww.... slytherin cock.... but other than that it was utterly fantastic. and i think i have the right to be a little distured by even the mere mention of Malfoy's cock. i positivly LOVED it.... is there more.... please let there be more


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  • From chocoman on March 04, 2009
    wow... fantastic start. i've always been partial to harry/luna stories though hardly anyone ever does any. which is why i just joined so i can finally start putting some pairings i've always been partial to up. but wonderful start please please PLEASE keep it coming i love it. im dying to know who the 'others' are
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  • From redheadfaerie on February 28, 2009
    i haven't really come to aff in.. well.. forever, but softobsidian74 recc'd your fic on her lj, and i thought i should check it out. and i am very, VERY glad that i did, because this is an amazing fic so far! you are so spot on with your characterizations, it's incredibly believable, and your writing is simply amazing! and so it appears that i will have to come back to aff to read the rest of this fic as you write it!
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  • From serenagold on February 28, 2009
    Wow.. There is a lot going on in this story than I originally expected. I'm really impressed. This was an excellent read and I'm really hoping you continue this.

    Keep up the excellent work!
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