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By : SalonKitty

From ANON - walters1 on July 22, 2013
PLEASE update this story! I have really enjoyed reading this over the past few days but really need to see Harry rescue Luna and the (hopefully) resultant forgiveness. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!
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From ANON - RadioActive on July 20, 2013
Having read till chapter twenty-nine, I think this is definitely one of the better fanfics I've read so far. The writer is definitely talented and it's good to read a story where the characters are so true to their original essence while still being developed in unexpected ways. I think the Harry/Luna pairing is a triumph, and really don't get why people don't use it more, but in a way I am glad that when it is written, it's with this kind of cleverness and sensitivity. The whole BDSM angle was really interesting to me, particularly from Harry's point of view and I think his dominant nature was made part of him, or actually almost made to blossom from within him, with a degree of dexterity that I applaud. The same also sits very well with Luna, and the way she receives Harry's attentions speaks in a typically Luna way of her deep seated devotion to him, and the reasons for her bonding with him are entirely believable. At the same time, I could criticize Harry's feelings for her in the sense that I question them, seeing as often I see him in nothing more than awe of her convenience and amenability as a receptacle of his desires, and not as much in love with Luna for being Luna. But then again, I am a romantic sap, so you can sue me for that opinion. I also find myself enjoying the depictions of life at Hogwarts and the maturity with which the plot is furthered and the psychology of all the characters in their respective situations is explored. Ginny in particular is spot on in the author's interpretation and depiction of her, and I also absolutely love the excerpts and lyrics thrown in on occasion- they complemet their respective chapters beautifully unlike the often fugly and certainly discoradnt playlists that certain other authors suggest with their stories. So yeah, I am basically a fan already and cannot wait for more from this author.
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From Hallowdeath on April 13, 2013
I commissioned some artwork that everyone might enjoy. Should be able to hold you over until the next chapter comes out.

Contains SPOILERS from chapters 4, and 25:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/tinkerbomb/199337/Luna-Lovegood---Barn
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/tinkerbomb/199336/Luna-Lovegood---Train-ride
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From ANON - GrimmLove on November 19, 2012
Ive found this nd started readin this on a whim; but that said im am totally hooked nd cant wait for more
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From ANON - Capri on October 09, 2012
I am totally and completely hooked on this story! Never in my wildest dreams would I have thought I'd enjoy a Harry/Luna fic. And the BDSM...usually not my thing but in this case it's incredibly hot and integral to the story. Please update soon (I'm sure you read that a lot). You're so friggin' talented. I want to grow up to be just like you!
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From Nadassar on May 21, 2012
First of all, i`m no native, so please excuse possible mistakes.
This is the first time i review a story.
I`ve spent a lot of time at adffn.net and found this story through accident. Up until now i`ve just read and never registerd or reviewed but your story was so fascinating that i simply had to. It is one of the few stories that are truly great and i`ve enjoyed the last days i`ve spent reading
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From Grimmlove on April 05, 2012
well i saw that one acomin;
I just started readin(just found tha site) nd i am really likin your work, its funny my roommates are in that scene nd its gives me a look into there world so to speak
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From Hallows_Seeker on March 06, 2012
Holy god you have to continue this story. Found it a few days ago, pretty much read it through in a straight shot. Some of the best characterization I've seen in any fic EVER. The scene with Snape and Luna was utterly fantastic. It's also both rare and welcoming to find an author with such a detailed knowledge of both the psychology and practices of the BDSM community. Breath of fresh air really.

Really hoping you update this gem of a story,

~Hallows Seeker
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From simbioza on December 03, 2011
Oh man, where do I start? This story blows me away, I created an account just so I could review it. I absolutely LOVE it! Luna has always been my favorite Harry Potter character, and like you, when she was introduced in the books I figured her to be a love interest for Harry because she was only too completely perfect. Ginny, pft. Soooooooooo I find this story and i'm smitten from the very start. The BDSM .. well its not really a fancy of mine and some of it (the last H/L encounter) has been a little hard to read. Buuuuuuut you write it so absolutely well I have my suspicions that you MUST be J.K taking a walk on the dark smutty side. I'm almost convinced. I'm sad to see that you haven't updated it in so long and i'm hoping you haven't given up on it. Or Girls & Boys because of course i'm obsessed with that one too. The story just leaves off at such a jumping point and i'm dying for Harry to see Luna again and how you see that encounter happening. My email is SimbiozaDva@gmail.com, could you please add it to your mailing list for when you update? Which I hope is going to be soooooooooooooooooooooooooon. I'm so impatient = anyway, thank you for writing this! It gave me the H/L fix i've been searching YEARS for!!
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From SalonKitty on August 29, 2011
The the Mods: This review was posted the other day, but was somehow lost. Whether I accidentally deleted it or the reviewer pulled it down, I have no idea, but I am re-posting it from my email alert

Body of review from I Love Luna Lovegood follows:

Okay, Uhmmm Where to start? First off, I absolutely love the story, and this is one of the most well developed Luna/Harry Stories I've ever read. Suffice to say, I registered for this site for the sole purpose of reviewing this story. It is absolutely amazing. Before reading this story I not only didn't really think much of Luna, but I didn't think much of BDSM either. I really enjoy the different spin you put on the whole thing and how cleanly and smoothly you manage to fit such a sensitive, and often misconcieved as violent sexual practice into the wizarding world of Harry Potter and Co. It is wonderful to see such a talented author as well. When I first started reading this yesterday (yes it was so good I stayed up and read the whole thing straight through) I was a bit worried as to how you would keep Luna Lovegood, as a personality, the same, and yet still show the changes that needed to be with respect to all that was going on in-canon and with Harry. I absolutely love the pairing as well, and I think the issue of Ginny was handled fairly well. You also are quite adept at problem-solving. I thought the romance between Ron, and Hermione was almost non-existant especially considering what Harry had done with Hermione yet it was cleaned up quite nicely. I look forward to seeing further developments in their relationship alongside this story. I cannot wait for the trio to rescue Luna. I think it would be good for Harry to have her back. And while this story is characterized by turmoil I know, seeing how you write, that you will manage to fix the Harry Luna situation quite well. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to see a really tender moment between Harry and Luna. I think, that while the sexual scenes play to your strength, it would be great for a relationship development to have them really talk, just once. Just a suggestion, but I think it would be great to read. Please don't stop writing. EVER.
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From mukamuka on May 31, 2011
So this is my first review, though I began reading your story a while back. I got to the chap where Snape discovers Luna's tattoo then didn't see the rest updates...so I decided to re-read the whole thing. It's really awesome :) sometimes a bit dark (as i'm not too much into bdsm stories) but i really like it, and it's sooo hot. Dom Harry? best idea ever. I love your characters, and the intensity of emotions in which they revolve. I felt horrible when Harry wore the locket with Luna! that was so awful, and I loved how you portray Dudley! it was very nice they met again, and that he's changed into a nice fella, it's a good thing they got a chance to have a good time together. And Ron! oh dear, he was so sweet with Hermione!

I can't wait to see what will happen at the manor. Would you add me to your update-mailing list, please?
Great story. You sure write wonderfully.
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From JasonsLea on February 25, 2011
I hope you update soon! Can you email me if you do?
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From JasonsLea on February 24, 2011
Chapter 19:

I think Hermoine may be jealous!

And I know you hate him, but I like Snape.
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From JasonsLea on February 24, 2011
Chap 16:

Fuck Ginny! I wish Luna had hexed the shit out of her! I hope Harry finds out.
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From JasonsLea on February 24, 2011
Chapter 15:

I don't think Harry would be a teen boy if he didn't fantasize about two hot girls together! LOL And, like you, I hated that Harry and Ginny got together in canon, along with Ron/Hermoine. It just doesn't feel like a good fit to me, like a cop out.
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